A God's Will
12 Word One Sentence Spiritual Fiction Contest God's Will53 total reviews
Comment from Tpa
A difficult prompt has indeed sparked your creativeness. I have read and enjoyed your twelve-word sentence with serious notions that God's continuous battle with us humans must, as you wrote explicitly, engage in a battle of separating good from evil in mass proportions. May they richly reward your entry.
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A difficult prompt has indeed sparked your creativeness. I have read and enjoyed your twelve-word sentence with serious notions that God's continuous battle with us humans must, as you wrote explicitly, engage in a battle of separating good from evil in mass proportions. May they richly reward your entry.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You got the words in, but I personally wish you were a little kinder toward those trying to protect their country and families. Have a blessed day with lots of sunshine.
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You got the words in, but I personally wish you were a little kinder toward those trying to protect their country and families. Have a blessed day with lots of sunshine.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Leann DS
it seems that you were able to meet all the contest requirements. I'm not sure what to call this, as it sounded poetic, but the contest requirements say that it should not be a poem. In any event, it's a good sentence with a complete thought-provoking sentiment, and you have followed all the rules. Well done!
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it seems that you were able to meet all the contest requirements. I'm not sure what to call this, as it sounded poetic, but the contest requirements say that it should not be a poem. In any event, it's a good sentence with a complete thought-provoking sentiment, and you have followed all the rules. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I am positive God will judge those started the war. It is not our job to do it. Your short, sweet, and to the point entry speaks volumes.
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I am positive God will judge those started the war. It is not our job to do it. Your short, sweet, and to the point entry speaks volumes.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is today that they should be sent to hell as tomorrow may be a little too late but I enjoyed the sentiment here and the world events are frightening just now, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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It is today that they should be sent to hell as tomorrow may be a little too late but I enjoyed the sentiment here and the world events are frightening just now, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
I wish he would hurry and send Putin to hell. If anyone needs to go there it is that man. I will never understand why one man can be allowed to cause so much pain and grief. If you look back at the time of kings it was the same thing. Good work. I wish you the best in the contest.
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I wish he would hurry and send Putin to hell. If anyone needs to go there it is that man. I will never understand why one man can be allowed to cause so much pain and grief. If you look back at the time of kings it was the same thing. Good work. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Those who start the wars, those who like killing, God will send to Hell. Those who fight for freedom, those who fight to protect their family and friends, God will bring to Heaven. Well done, you used your words well. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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Those who start the wars, those who like killing, God will send to Hell. Those who fight for freedom, those who fight to protect their family and friends, God will bring to Heaven. Well done, you used your words well. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from jwsteele
God of Heaven will send all war engaged men to Hell tomorrow.
That would truly be Divine. An act of that nature would rid the world of a substantial portion of the demonic entities disguised as homosapien on this creation. What would the world do without war? I guess we'll never know.
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God of Heaven will send all war engaged men to Hell tomorrow.
That would truly be Divine. An act of that nature would rid the world of a substantial portion of the demonic entities disguised as homosapien on this creation. What would the world do without war? I guess we'll never know.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your story. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
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I have enjoyed reading your story. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written sentence. The three required words are use. No religious names are used. The required punctuation is used without any additional ones. The sentence is coherent. Nice job.
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This is a well written sentence. The three required words are use. No religious names are used. The required punctuation is used without any additional ones. The sentence is coherent. Nice job.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022