Now I See Me
Catching up with my life...49 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading you poem. It's a great contest entry, youshould do well. You did a nice job with the prompt. Your writing feels honest and I thank you for sharing.
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I enjoyed reading you poem. It's a great contest entry, youshould do well. You did a nice job with the prompt. Your writing feels honest and I thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from nomi338
To lose one's identity is to lose one's way in life. If you do not know who you are or where you are going, you are destined to wind up at a gigantic wall, stalling any and all forward progress. If you are able to recapture your healthy state of mind, you are well on your way to full recovery.
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To lose one's identity is to lose one's way in life. If you do not know who you are or where you are going, you are destined to wind up at a gigantic wall, stalling any and all forward progress. If you are able to recapture your healthy state of mind, you are well on your way to full recovery.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is interesting and unique. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is interesting and unique. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much Raul...
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You're welcome
Comment from Thatguypk
I imagine that most of us look back at our past and can hardly recognize the person we used to be, or perhaps the person we have become. But isn't that just a part of life's adventure? Happiness and regrets, constantly intermingling. This is a lovely and engaging reflective piece. Thanks for sharing.
PK
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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I imagine that most of us look back at our past and can hardly recognize the person we used to be, or perhaps the person we have become. But isn't that just a part of life's adventure? Happiness and regrets, constantly intermingling. This is a lovely and engaging reflective piece. Thanks for sharing.
PK
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for this humbling review Thatguypk... It is a long strange trip I've been on. Thanks so much again... yours
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Anybody that says this is not one of the hottest poems in the contest entry, Is crazy! For, you took me right into a vivid picture with the creativity of a genius! And the last part "I walk away, and never look back", was the punchline that took it over the top. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Anybody that says this is not one of the hottest poems in the contest entry, Is crazy! For, you took me right into a vivid picture with the creativity of a genius! And the last part "I walk away, and never look back", was the punchline that took it over the top. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk. Stay Connected
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Wow... I completely appreciate your eloquent review... It humbles me and I will keep in touch...
Comment from Mickamus J
Thank you for your sharing. It is clear that you have gone through a lot of experiences where tough choices and decisions were made. I hope you are better for it.
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Thank you for your sharing. It is clear that you have gone through a lot of experiences where tough choices and decisions were made. I hope you are better for it.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from lancellot
Hey, crazy thoughts come to all of us. Yes, the person who we were when we were young and the dream that person had, changes. Life is a roller coaster. The high point is having the strength to push through and find the real you in the moment.
Well done.
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Hey, crazy thoughts come to all of us. Yes, the person who we were when we were young and the dream that person had, changes. Life is a roller coaster. The high point is having the strength to push through and find the real you in the moment.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from Cristine22
I love how hopeful this is. It feels very real, the idea of someone losing touch with life and then coming back when he/she realizes it. The theme seems very clear, and the words flow well. I enjoyed this. Great job!
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I love how hopeful this is. It feels very real, the idea of someone losing touch with life and then coming back when he/she realizes it. The theme seems very clear, and the words flow well. I enjoyed this. Great job!
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
Comment from Eunice Amero
That would be freaky. I would never want to experiences that. I would never turn around either. Just keep right on a going. You did a good job and I wish you all the best.
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That would be freaky. I would never want to experiences that. I would never turn around either. Just keep right on a going. You did a good job and I wish you all the best.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2022