The Return
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Obviously, Margot has a shock; rightly expressed thru the characters, yes, confusion is right, Margaret squinted to read the name, perchance, the amorous ghost's lost love, surname could not, she read her date of birth, since Meg was 24 when she died, Margot was of the same age now; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Obviously, Margot has a shock; rightly expressed thru the characters, yes, confusion is right, Margaret squinted to read the name, perchance, the amorous ghost's lost love, surname could not, she read her date of birth, since Meg was 24 when she died, Margot was of the same age now; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR, I really appreciated all your comments! Have a lovely week, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from BethShelby
I think this is going to be an exciting story. I apparently deals with reincarnation. Margot seems to be Meg since she had the reaction to the wedding dress and is so drawn to this house. I guessing the reason this house has sold for so little is because of it ghosts. Bessie must not be bothered by them. I wonder if she is from another time when maybe girls were not encouraged to drink coffee.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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I think this is going to be an exciting story. I apparently deals with reincarnation. Margot seems to be Meg since she had the reaction to the wedding dress and is so drawn to this house. I guessing the reason this house has sold for so little is because of it ghosts. Bessie must not be bothered by them. I wonder if she is from another time when maybe girls were not encouraged to drink coffee.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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I was surprised at the facts regarding coffee, and you're right, coffee was for men only. You've got quite a bit right in this review, but I'm not telling you which other parts are. Lol. Thank you so much, Beth, for this lovely review and the sixth golden star! You've made my day sparkle! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx