The Return
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Comment from Ben Colder
Well written in your native language. So we enter into the paranormal beckoning of the past. It should be interesting. There are many places in God, the Lord declares. But it would help if you remembered that the dead knows nothing, only those alive in Christ.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Well written in your native language. So we enter into the paranormal beckoning of the past. It should be interesting. There are many places in God, the Lord declares. But it would help if you remembered that the dead knows nothing, only those alive in Christ.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, dear Chuck, for this golden star and the lovely review. I really appreciate your words, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandy. xx
Comment from Begin Again
A stunner! You gripped with every word you wrote. It definitely drew the reader deep into the heart of the story, gasping for more. It's going to be a tremendous ride and I can't wait to read it.
I felt what I wrote today was lacking and now I know it is. I need a rewrite or some lessons I think. You have done an outstanding job.
Smiles, hugs and so much more. So deserving of the six and plenty more.
Love ya, Carol
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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A stunner! You gripped with every word you wrote. It definitely drew the reader deep into the heart of the story, gasping for more. It's going to be a tremendous ride and I can't wait to read it.
I felt what I wrote today was lacking and now I know it is. I need a rewrite or some lessons I think. You have done an outstanding job.
Smiles, hugs and so much more. So deserving of the six and plenty more.
Love ya, Carol
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Oh, Carol, thank you for this lovely review and the golden sixth star. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you, my sweet friend. I'm going to pm you. Love you lots my sweet friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wow!!! Oh wow!!! I can't wait for more. I enjoyed reading. I can tell this will be a fun ride.
On his nod, she continued. 'I'm interested in the white stone house (comma needed after 'continued')
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Wow!!! Oh wow!!! I can't wait for more. I enjoyed reading. I can tell this will be a fun ride.
On his nod, she continued. 'I'm interested in the white stone house (comma needed after 'continued')
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Barbara, for that golden star and for finding that nit! I've changed it now. Thank you! Your review is amazing, and I love you for it. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
A ghost story, and I totally believe in ghosts! of course she is going to buy the house. She belongs there. The ghost obviously wants her. I'm guessing she lived there in a past life.
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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A ghost story, and I totally believe in ghosts! of course she is going to buy the house. She belongs there. The ghost obviously wants her. I'm guessing she lived there in a past life.
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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I love it when readers get involved, thank you so much, Cindy. Of course I'm not going to tell you!! LOL. Thank you, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from damommy
This sounds like a cross between "The Enchanted Cottage" and "The Ghost and Mrs. Muir," two of my very favorite movies that I watch frequently. But - this has someone waiting for her in the cottage. Wait. Is this going to be a love story between two times? I know your talent for creating something extraordinary! Are you going to post only once a week?
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This sounds like a cross between "The Enchanted Cottage" and "The Ghost and Mrs. Muir," two of my very favorite movies that I watch frequently. But - this has someone waiting for her in the cottage. Wait. Is this going to be a love story between two times? I know your talent for creating something extraordinary! Are you going to post only once a week?
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Aw, bless you, my lovely sister. I wish I could post more but it takes ages to get the pumps, and I do like to read everyones properly. I hate it when people just put a review on for the pumps. I've got four chapters drafted, but they need tidying up. You have almost got it, but it's a bit more involved. I am so very pleased you liked this first chapter. My heart is still thumping like it does when I first post. Lol, I'm always so nervous. I'm glad you were my first review. Thank you for the golden star!! Love you lots, and sending loads of hugs, and we'll chat in the week again. xxxx Sandra