Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent story my friend and the storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together! This piece is exemplary and is well written and well thought out;-)

Thank you so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this New Years ahead!

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

Thank you, Melodie, for reading my prologue and for the lovely review. I'm so very pleased you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful 2022, my friend, warm hugs Sandra xx

Comment from Begin Again

Exceptional

All right then...and away we go! It appears that we have both delved into the spirit/ phantom world, but yours is far more titillating than mine. You definitely can reach the senses with this one, my friend. I am eager to find where and how we will be traveling through this one.

As always, I am looking forward to reading and enjoying it. I wish you luck and happy writing. I hope you have a wonderful new year.

I've got my first chapter ready to go... but it certainly won't rattle the senses as this Prologue has done. Exceptional as I would always expect.

Sending all my smiles, hugs, and love that I could conjure up.... maybe the mind-blowing spirits can assist me in finding more. LOL

Take care, and I look forward to Chapter One! Love ya, Carol

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

Lol, Carol, I'll send my ghost over to you when I've finished with him!! Thank you so very much for the lovely sixth star, I didn't think anyone would have any left this time of the week, so I'm very, very grateful that you did. And a big thank you for this amazing review, I was so worried about posting it, but so far, touch wood, it's been well received. Now you have got me all worked up to read your new book, will that be on Sunday? Or sooner?

Thanks again, my dear friend. I wish for you a much nicer, happier year than the one you've just had. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx

reply by Begin Again on 31-Dec-2021

I've written two chapters for "Vanished" and also a contest entry for "true stories" that kind of tore me up yesterday. I've been working on the re-writes, too, so my eyes are going crisscrossed. LOL, I probably will post the true story tomorrow and the first chapter on Sunday. As for the six, I always save one for the end of the week because I've read some fantastic stories and always say I wish I had a six. It's a pleasant surprise for the author too!

Especially my favorites!!!

Love you! Carol

reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

Love you too!! xxxxx

Comment from Pantygynt

Exceptional

Seeing the old year out with a bang, aren't we? I don't think I have ever read a prologue like this before. I have heard of starting 'in medias res' before but not 'in medias orgasmo'!

May I take this opportunity of wishing you a happy and prosperous New Year in which all your dreams come true - including this one!

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

LOL!!! Thank you, Jim! Once the story gets properly underway, you will understand the prologue more. Now you know why I was a tad nervous, thank you so very much for the sixth star, you have made me feel a lot better about it.

Thank you for the new year wishes, I wish you the same, and a brilliant holiday in America! Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx

reply by Pantygynt on 31-Dec-2021

Thanks for the good wishes. If I ever manage to get to America I am sure I will enjoy myself, even if as at present the weather is like it is here - wet!

reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

That shouldn't dampen your holiday, though, it will be a wonderful experience. I've never been to the US, so bring back lots of photos. xxx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Wow! You've surpassed yourself with this one, Sandra, and I'm so glad I have a six to give you. It's very hard to write sexual scenes tastefully, but you nailed it.
I can't wait until you post on Sunday!
Happy New Year, my dear friend.

Alexis xxx

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

Thank you so much for that gorgeous sixth star, Alexis, and also the wonderful review. I have to admit, I was quite nervous putting this on here. I'm so pleased you think it was tastefully done. Thank you!! Love and hugs, Sandra xxx

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Well you surly hav everyone's attention with but of teasing. So everyone is chomping at the bit got waiting for Sundays edition.See you Sunday back here on Fan story.

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

LOL! I was a bit scared when it came to posting it, but it is a relevent part of the plot even though the book is not a sexy one!! Lol (ok, perhaps it's just a little bit sexy!)

Thank you so much for reading my prologue, you really have eased my mind! Have a wonderful New Year, my friend, warm hugs, Sandra xx

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Well you surly hav everyone's attention with but of teasing. So everyone is chomping at the bit got waiting for Sundays edition.See you Sunday back here on Fan story.

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

Your review came through twice, Mel, so a double thank you. :)) xxxx

reply by country ranch writer on 31-Dec-2021

Smikes

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Sandra, this is a tantalising beginning to your new book. You have certainly set the scene, making sure I'll want to read more. It's beautifully written and I'm curious to find out what it's all about. I do hope you and Graham will have a wonderful New Year as well.
I wish I had a six to give. A big hug, Ulla xxx
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

You have no idea how my heart was banging in my chest, worried about how this prologue would be taken. I know I will lose a couple of my readers, but it's not really a sex novel, but is relevent to the story. Thank you so much, Ulla, and just knowing you'd give it a six put a smile on my face. Love and hugs, my friend, and Have a Wonderful New Year!! :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

Good morning, Sandra Mitchell! I read your bio and learned that you have been with us for a while. So, it can't be a surprise that I need to tell you your print is far too small for me to read! I would love to comment on what you wrote but my vision is dim and I have poor eyesight coordination and I must not be the only one who has trouble reading this very fine print.
Have a happy 2022!
Jesse


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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

Hi Jessie, I've enlarged the print now, but this prologue is just a piece to draw readers in to find out what the heck it going on. The first chapter starts the story on Sunday. Although the prologue is slightly sensual, it is not that type of story but is a natural part. I can't explain more or I'll give the plot away. I'll also be writing more of my idioms next week!! Thanks for letting me know about the print, that was so kind of you, I have enlarged it now. Warm hugs, dear friend. Happy New Year!! :)) Sandra xx