Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for this perfect Christmas poem. You covered everything I wanted to about the Lord's Incarnation and you also added the joys of the angels, shepherds, and the kings! It should have been in the Christmas poem contest but I know where you stand with that.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks Helen, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem you've penned here, Roy, to celebrate the birth of Christ. It's a story we never get tired of hearing as we near Christmas. Thank you for adding some real class, and reminding us what we are celebrating.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks Jay, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yours is a great poem, Roy. It's a timely reminder of the price Christ paid to save us. Your lines read well with great smooth flow and imagery. The color scheme and image are well chosen, too. Your message is loud and clear and so true.
Thinks for haring.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks Jan, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Brilliant verse spot-on for the season. Clever title segues to humble bed of hay ... donned humility. Vivid imagery and fresh phrasing--(torn) from the page of mercy's dawn

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks Liz, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Nicely done Roy. Seems we have picked the same subject to represent the tidings this year at this relevant time.
A humbling we all feel and adhere to.
Words presented in their earnest.
Have a special Christmas Roy, to you and family.
My best wishes.
RG

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks RG, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Hallelujah! We've been found and salvation has come through Jesus Christ! A beautifully penned poem in celebration. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for Christmas,
Sally XOs

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks Sally, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy