Spread your wings
A poem in heptameter.53 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Roy,
This is a metaphoric view of stars. They provide us liight and we wish upon them. They also make us think the the divine and eternal. This should that faith helps us understand somewhat. It gives us strength to withstand the fact we will never totally understand creation and our place in it.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Roy,
This is a metaphoric view of stars. They provide us liight and we wish upon them. They also make us think the the divine and eternal. This should that faith helps us understand somewhat. It gives us strength to withstand the fact we will never totally understand creation and our place in it.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Joan, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are most kindly welcome on all accounts, Roy.
Joan
Comment from Chrissy710
Gorgeous Roy beautiful meter and lovely words I love to see a really starry night when camping always make me feel safe and
So interesting seeing all the formations
Excellent work Cheers Chrisx
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Gorgeous Roy beautiful meter and lovely words I love to see a really starry night when camping always make me feel safe and
So interesting seeing all the formations
Excellent work Cheers Chrisx
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Chris, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Spread Your Wings ', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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' Spread Your Wings ', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Duchess, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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Roy, my friend you certainly deserved both.
Bless you and have a good day :)))
the Duchess
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You are kind Duchess
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Roy I try to be.
Comment from RGstar
Interesting hypothesis Roy, and long has here been mystery around the stars and their constellation.
You have woven in through faith, and once again your faith shines through.
A nice read and good rhythm.
Wishing you a nice weekend, and sunny Sunday.
My best.
RG
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Interesting hypothesis Roy, and long has here been mystery around the stars and their constellation.
You have woven in through faith, and once again your faith shines through.
A nice read and good rhythm.
Wishing you a nice weekend, and sunny Sunday.
My best.
RG
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much RG, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Eric Clausen
Your variance of light & dark keep this interesting. Great use of yin & yang of need and want. Thanks, pretty cool works!! â?¾ð?¤? Even dimly lit one sees awareness
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Your variance of light & dark keep this interesting. Great use of yin & yang of need and want. Thanks, pretty cool works!! â?¾ð?¤? Even dimly lit one sees awareness
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks,
Comment from Ben Colder
I am reminded. He appears to those who look for Him. The Father has and will always reveal Himself to those who desire to know Him. To some, it is like a game of Hiding and Seeks. To those who know Him. He longs to communicate. Adam in the garden is a great example.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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I am reminded. He appears to those who look for Him. The Father has and will always reveal Himself to those who desire to know Him. To some, it is like a game of Hiding and Seeks. To those who know Him. He longs to communicate. Adam in the garden is a great example.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Ben, for these fantastic comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Poem in Heptameter speaks in a free flow of thought with stunning imagery to spread your wings after perfect, encouraging performance hidden; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible post, time is rare gift, post more, fast, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth, R 123000/N21. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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This Poem in Heptameter speaks in a free flow of thought with stunning imagery to spread your wings after perfect, encouraging performance hidden; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible post, time is rare gift, post more, fast, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth, R 123000/N21. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
SSSSSStupendous. Compelling and powerful--magnificent imagery in sssssstunning form. The first stanza is especially brilliant. Thanks for notes for context. Cheerssssss. LIZ
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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SSSSSStupendous. Compelling and powerful--magnificent imagery in sssssstunning form. The first stanza is especially brilliant. Thanks for notes for context. Cheerssssss. LIZ
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks again Liz, for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Patty Palmer
Another extremely well-written poem about the stars in the sky. Some see the stars as telling your fortune or lay out your future. But, no one or nothing knows our precise future except for our Lord God. Only He knows the path He has set before us. If we believe in Him we don't have to question our future because He wants only good for us all, just as every father wants for his children. So there's no need to look to the stars for anything other than they are something He made that we can take pleasure in their beauty. Great job!!!
Patty
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Another extremely well-written poem about the stars in the sky. Some see the stars as telling your fortune or lay out your future. But, no one or nothing knows our precise future except for our Lord God. Only He knows the path He has set before us. If we believe in Him we don't have to question our future because He wants only good for us all, just as every father wants for his children. So there's no need to look to the stars for anything other than they are something He made that we can take pleasure in their beauty. Great job!!!
Patty
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Patty, for these fantastic comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is a beautiful description of the sky and all the beauty and mystery that it holds. Such small things as the stars can hold such power. A great job, and gorgeous artwork that went perfectly with your work.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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This is a beautiful description of the sky and all the beauty and mystery that it holds. Such small things as the stars can hold such power. A great job, and gorgeous artwork that went perfectly with your work.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Monica, for these fantastic comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy