Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a good entry for the - 8 words or less poem contest.
You have utilised the few words to convey a profound and
reflective statement. The picture attached doesn't seem to
fit the piece - just my opinion.
Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021

Thanks

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

Interesting poem. Great wordplay. All our knowledge begins with senses and ends with reason. A little nonsense in between makes life more interesting. Much enjoyed. Good luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021

Thank you

Comment from Demetria Blouin

Excellent

Very thought provoking piece. Definitely got me thinking. Great use of the limited allowable word usage to get your point made. Still not certain if I'm understanding your intended meaning though. Very well done! Good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021

The brain uses its information processing capability to build images in our mind(s). These images are affected by our understanding...John