A wand'ring wail
A poem45 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
I absolutely loved this stanza Roy... loved it!
I'd rather dwell in restful peace,
than travel roads here vultures feast.
Our souls were meant for wisdom's call,
to enter courts where angels sprawl
and not to wander orphan's grove,
where giants nest and rag-dreams rove.
I have just checked and I have a six left, it is now yours my friend, an inspirational write !
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
  |
I absolutely loved this stanza Roy... loved it!
I'd rather dwell in restful peace,
than travel roads here vultures feast.
Our souls were meant for wisdom's call,
to enter courts where angels sprawl
and not to wander orphan's grove,
where giants nest and rag-dreams rove.
I have just checked and I have a six left, it is now yours my friend, an inspirational write !
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
-
Thanks so much for your wonderful comments and an excellent review, a super stars, blessings Roy
Comment from knowledge
Don't have any 6 stars but you deserve them for this poignant poem.
It is very well constructed and has a great rhythm. Also great meaning. Poor Mother Earth is heating up now getting ready to burn at His coming. She is a woman scorned and she is ready to unleash her destructive power! We have prevented her from doing her job of raising righteous children unto Our Father. Killing her babies before they have a chance to live . . .
Great Job.
May Our Heavenly Family Bless You and Yours.
Your Friend, Danny
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
 |
Don't have any 6 stars but you deserve them for this poignant poem.
It is very well constructed and has a great rhythm. Also great meaning. Poor Mother Earth is heating up now getting ready to burn at His coming. She is a woman scorned and she is ready to unleash her destructive power! We have prevented her from doing her job of raising righteous children unto Our Father. Killing her babies before they have a chance to live . . .
Great Job.
May Our Heavenly Family Bless You and Yours.
Your Friend, Danny
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
-
Thanks Danny, for this lovely review and comments blessings Roy
Comment from Jay Squires
Man seems to have his wandering side, and it seems that Roy also gets swept into adventure's squawl. But there is an internal compass that draws you back to the Wisdom that is the lodestone in your soul. As with all your poems, Roy your lodestone always brings you back to Wisdom's Way.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
|
Man seems to have his wandering side, and it seems that Roy also gets swept into adventure's squawl. But there is an internal compass that draws you back to the Wisdom that is the lodestone in your soul. As with all your poems, Roy your lodestone always brings you back to Wisdom's Way.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
-
Thanks Jay, for this lovely review and comments blessings Roy
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Roy,
That was a wonderful poem. It flowed well and the message is needed so much right now. Thanks for being bold in sharing your faith. We've come to a time where we must decide if we are going to be for God or against Him. There are no more gray areas. Have a blessed day.
Tom
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
|
Hello Roy,
That was a wonderful poem. It flowed well and the message is needed so much right now. Thanks for being bold in sharing your faith. We've come to a time where we must decide if we are going to be for God or against Him. There are no more gray areas. Have a blessed day.
Tom
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
-
Thanks Tom, for this lovely review and comments blessings Roy
Comment from karenina
Evil Eddie attacked your author's notes...(So frustrating when that happens!)
Your well rhymed poem flowed evenly, and with phrasing that is uniquely your own!
Inspiring and contemplative!
Check line 14...you have "here" vultures feast. I think you may have intended that to be "where"--
Very nice write.
Karenina
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
|
Evil Eddie attacked your author's notes...(So frustrating when that happens!)
Your well rhymed poem flowed evenly, and with phrasing that is uniquely your own!
Inspiring and contemplative!
Check line 14...you have "here" vultures feast. I think you may have intended that to be "where"--
Very nice write.
Karenina
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
-
Thanks Karen, for this lovely review and comments blessings Roy
-
Blessings back!
K
-
Are you winning dear girl.
-
Every day We live to fight, is a win!
Karenina