Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Thoughts on Love through Nature"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Thoughts on Love through Nature, takes the reader on a walk among the flora and fauna which makes up the chosen path. The sights of familiar bends and movements, and the sounds of birds and breezes blend with images of younger generations finding these moments now. Nice.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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This free verse, Thoughts on Love through Nature, takes the reader on a walk among the flora and fauna which makes up the chosen path. The sights of familiar bends and movements, and the sounds of birds and breezes blend with images of younger generations finding these moments now. Nice.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Thanks a ton Bill ... I always value your comments.
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
What a lovely poem .I can visualize it all I can feel the air I can smell the fragrances of the flowers and the trees .You took me there with your beautiful words ! Thank you for sharing .Carmen :)
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What a lovely poem .I can visualize it all I can feel the air I can smell the fragrances of the flowers and the trees .You took me there with your beautiful words ! Thank you for sharing .Carmen :)
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Carmen, You are very kind in taking the time to read and comment on my free verse...🙏
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It was absolutely my pleeasure
Comment from Sherry Asbury
What a lovely poem that draws love's portrait. It is very well-written and leads to your point in an ending that leaves the reader with a sigh. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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What a lovely poem that draws love's portrait. It is very well-written and leads to your point in an ending that leaves the reader with a sigh. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Sherry...that is the the reaction I most hoped for! Thanks so very much for your review and comments. 🙏
Comment from Janet Foor
This is an amazing poem to read and realize that your free verse poem is profound and yet is available to those who would seek it.
I felt like I was there with you on your walk and sharing the joy of God's creation - wishing we would all make the effort to see it! .
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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This is an amazing poem to read and realize that your free verse poem is profound and yet is available to those who would seek it.
I felt like I was there with you on your walk and sharing the joy of God's creation - wishing we would all make the effort to see it! .
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Oh My goodness! Janet you have made my day! I am honored by the six stars most certainly, however, the Spiritual connections is the cherry on the sundae 🙏
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