Forever
A Love poem not using the word love45 total reviews
Comment from palmart
What a "high voltage" poem!! You really avoided the word "love" but it is in every line and every word you wrote. Last two lines are the colophon of your poem and mark the eternal "heart property" of one to the other. Picture is just perfect as the rings shadow in two hearts. Great job!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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What a "high voltage" poem!! You really avoided the word "love" but it is in every line and every word you wrote. Last two lines are the colophon of your poem and mark the eternal "heart property" of one to the other. Picture is just perfect as the rings shadow in two hearts. Great job!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this delightful review, the sixth star and for your understanding of my poem.
Blessings
Janet
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You´re very welcome, Janet!!
Have a great week, month, year... Life!!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. A very romantic poem. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. A very romantic poem. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Raul for this lovely review and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome!
Comment from robyn corum
Janet,
Oh, wow. I have read hundreds upon hundreds (upon billions?) of love poems since I joined FanStory - but this may be one of the best ever? I have no doubt your hubby loved it. I certainly did. There are so many magical moments here - especially the ones depicting a world without your love. Ugly and cold, indeed. Do me a favor and tell him - for allllll of us -- PLEASE stick around???
hahaha Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Janet,
Oh, wow. I have read hundreds upon hundreds (upon billions?) of love poems since I joined FanStory - but this may be one of the best ever? I have no doubt your hubby loved it. I certainly did. There are so many magical moments here - especially the ones depicting a world without your love. Ugly and cold, indeed. Do me a favor and tell him - for allllll of us -- PLEASE stick around???
hahaha Thanks so much!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Dear robyn,
Sorry I have taken so long to write to you as I was overwhelmed by your amazing review. I don?t think - no, I know that I have never received such a review from someone I respected as much as I do you. Thank you again for your comments, the stars and your encouragement.
Take care and stay well.
Blessings to you and yours
Janet
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Yay! I'm so glad. I meant every word.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
What a kewl love poem. It is forever love without having to say love. Brilliant. I have felt those emotions myself ehat if my partner ever left I might wither and die.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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What a kewl love poem. It is forever love without having to say love. Brilliant. I have felt those emotions myself ehat if my partner ever left I might wither and die.
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Lance for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
Yes, indeed, I was pointing out to folk with the plethora of love poems coming out, the many adjectives to describe that word "love" in Ancient Greek, the only "real" one was agape', the Christ-like love of sacrifice. I like yours better, I don't know what I have for my children and grands, ("storge" is the word") but it certainly runs deep, as does my "love" for Elaine. This is beautifully written, it's one of your best, God is the god of second chances, so well done Janet. Congratulations, using your talent as God intended. Blessings Roy.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Yes, indeed, I was pointing out to folk with the plethora of love poems coming out, the many adjectives to describe that word "love" in Ancient Greek, the only "real" one was agape', the Christ-like love of sacrifice. I like yours better, I don't know what I have for my children and grands, ("storge" is the word") but it certainly runs deep, as does my "love" for Elaine. This is beautifully written, it's one of your best, God is the god of second chances, so well done Janet. Congratulations, using your talent as God intended. Blessings Roy.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review and for you continued encouragement of my writing. I have learned so much from your writing and you are an inspiration to me everyday.
Blessings my friend.
Janet
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Bless you Janet, you are kind, but yours is the talent, thank God.