Betrayal
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Another excellent chapter, Sandra.
-Poor Tania has had to endure so much.
-The beginning shows some of what
Grant has in mind, and calling in Lorna
to the meeting was a good idea.
-I think his buddies thought so, too!
-Hopefully, Tania takes as good a
care of herself as she can, and I
would think she wouldn't resist
anymore at this point.
-Hopefully, Grant and his mates
have a very good plan.
-It was a good idea for Grant
to see Monica and make sure
she stays safe, and that she
knows people are trying to help.
-Hopefully, we have some kind
of news, along with Tania and Monica!
-Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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-Another excellent chapter, Sandra.
-Poor Tania has had to endure so much.
-The beginning shows some of what
Grant has in mind, and calling in Lorna
to the meeting was a good idea.
-I think his buddies thought so, too!
-Hopefully, Tania takes as good a
care of herself as she can, and I
would think she wouldn't resist
anymore at this point.
-Hopefully, Grant and his mates
have a very good plan.
-It was a good idea for Grant
to see Monica and make sure
she stays safe, and that she
knows people are trying to help.
-Hopefully, we have some kind
of news, along with Tania and Monica!
-Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Pam, for this wonderful review, and all those pretty stars. The plan is coming together, slowly, but we still have a few hours left in the day. I'm so pleased you liked this part. Warm hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
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You are very welcome and deserving, Sandra. I came up with a great suggestion in your message box.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter of the Fiction speaks expressively the descriptions in an appropriate taletelling, and plot development, with a good beginning and curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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This Chapter of the Fiction speaks expressively the descriptions in an appropriate taletelling, and plot development, with a good beginning and curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Alcreator, for another fine review. I always appreciate your comments. Thank you for reading this part. Warm hugs, my friend. :))Sandra xx
Comment from siais
A glimmer of optimism sparked in her eyes and he fervently prayed to God they would find her friend tonight. 'How are you sleeping?'
This line reminded me of something I have experienced in past, well written waiting for next one, hope to read soon!
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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A glimmer of optimism sparked in her eyes and he fervently prayed to God they would find her friend tonight. 'How are you sleeping?'
This line reminded me of something I have experienced in past, well written waiting for next one, hope to read soon!
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading this part, Siais, and the lovely review you gave it. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Pantygynt
'Grant released a deep, pensive groan. 'Lorna had similar thoughts.' But how does Grant know she has similar thoughts? He merely asked her to come in. She doesn't come in till the next paragraph or been brought up to speed. Or have I missed something?
When she came in she had little to offer. It made me wonder why you brought her in at this point, except that it does serve to emphasise how bewildered they all are. We get an update on Tania's condition in the second part and you have us identifying with her enough to be mentally screaming at her not to release the passwords. That Colin doesn't have them is the only thing that is keeping her alive.
Another exciting episode.
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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'Grant released a deep, pensive groan. 'Lorna had similar thoughts.' But how does Grant know she has similar thoughts? He merely asked her to come in. She doesn't come in till the next paragraph or been brought up to speed. Or have I missed something?
When she came in she had little to offer. It made me wonder why you brought her in at this point, except that it does serve to emphasise how bewildered they all are. We get an update on Tania's condition in the second part and you have us identifying with her enough to be mentally screaming at her not to release the passwords. That Colin doesn't have them is the only thing that is keeping her alive.
Another exciting episode.
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Your memory is failing!! LOL He knew because she told him in a previous chapter.
Thanks Jim, I'm glad you thought it was an exciting chapter. It's seems as if she's been away ages, yet this is only the third day, and today isn't over yet. Warm hugs my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Sorry. That is the problem with reading chapters spaced out like this. I found Tony's book had the same problems - cured when one reads for pleasure.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is one spine tangling story to follow.Tania is really suffering for her principles and her architect skills. Very few people have that kind of gumption, so it is thrilling to read about it. Well done again!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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This is one spine tangling story to follow.Tania is really suffering for her principles and her architect skills. Very few people have that kind of gumption, so it is thrilling to read about it. Well done again!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, Rebecca. I often wondered how much I would take if I knew I would die if I gave in. Most people would cling to the hope that they'd be rescued. But, my pain threshold is pratically zero! lol. Thanks, my friend. I appreciated your lovely review and the stars. Have a lovely week. :))Sandra xx
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My pain level is high. so I would suffer much in the long run. Ha ha
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You are lucky, but I hope it's never put to the test!!!! Lol. xx