Rain, Rain Go Away
A day from rain to clear skies75 total reviews
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I love how you used the required words to write your poem. I like how you started out your poem with the lady zipping her soda. Next she ran in the rain, but were blinded by the lighting. The rain ceased and she stared at the beautiful stars which was an exhilarating sight. Then, the day was over. This is a nicely written poem. Well done.
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Hello,
I love how you used the required words to write your poem. I like how you started out your poem with the lady zipping her soda. Next she ran in the rain, but were blinded by the lighting. The rain ceased and she stared at the beautiful stars which was an exhilarating sight. Then, the day was over. This is a nicely written poem. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from greyson ernst
what type of poem is this? good luck in the contest and the picture is perfect cleo is amazing and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
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what type of poem is this? good luck in the contest and the picture is perfect cleo is amazing and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You covered all that nicely, using the words you had to use for the prompt to relate what her day was like. It's not easy to do, but you have done it well. I enjoyed her day in the rain. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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You covered all that nicely, using the words you had to use for the prompt to relate what her day was like. It's not easy to do, but you have done it well. I enjoyed her day in the rain. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned for the writing prompt words. You used very good descriptive words to go with the required words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned for the writing prompt words. You used very good descriptive words to go with the required words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Susan Larson
I love all your lilting alliteration. What a nice touch to this poem which only required you use those specified words. The picture goes so well with your words. It is truly "an exhilarating exhibit" of the mental picture your poem presents. Good luck in the contest.
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I love all your lilting alliteration. What a nice touch to this poem which only required you use those specified words. The picture goes so well with your words. It is truly "an exhilarating exhibit" of the mental picture your poem presents. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from equestrik
I enjoyed thi presentation for the writing prompt using specific words. You have done well and have painted a visual with your words so well that a picture was not necessary. Well done.
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I enjoyed thi presentation for the writing prompt using specific words. You have done well and have painted a visual with your words so well that a picture was not necessary. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Definitely a good use of the required words. The visual picture you draw is easy to see and follow. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Smiles to you!
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Definitely a good use of the required words. The visual picture you draw is easy to see and follow. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Smiles to you!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Rain is refreshing and like blessings, it descends from heaven. If we do not accept it, walking in the rain will make you wet only. Not for the girl in the poem who ran in the rain to stare at the stars and wonder at nature. An interesting poem so well worded. Good luck in the contest!
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Rain is refreshing and like blessings, it descends from heaven. If we do not accept it, walking in the rain will make you wet only. Not for the girl in the poem who ran in the rain to stare at the stars and wonder at nature. An interesting poem so well worded. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from victor 66
You did include all the words, "soda, rain, building, stars, exhilarating, done". What I appreciated most was that you actually told a short story within the confines of the prompt's rules. Good entry. And I wish you luck in the contest.
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You did include all the words, "soda, rain, building, stars, exhilarating, done". What I appreciated most was that you actually told a short story within the confines of the prompt's rules. Good entry. And I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from E. Denison
This is a charming little poem with a familiar title. Well done with the use of storytelling through the assortment of required words. Good luck in the competition.
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This is a charming little poem with a familiar title. Well done with the use of storytelling through the assortment of required words. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021