Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Walking the Strand"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from Mastery
A lot of great images in this poetry, Jim. Very well written and thought-provoking:
"Love's thoughts abate the noise as waves roll hard
upon large rocks, capriciousness could sway
flirtations grasp reserved, too fast; safeguard..."
Great write, I am embarrassed to say I have already squandered all of my sixes, my friend. so sorry. Bob
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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A lot of great images in this poetry, Jim. Very well written and thought-provoking:
"Love's thoughts abate the noise as waves roll hard
upon large rocks, capriciousness could sway
flirtations grasp reserved, too fast; safeguard..."
Great write, I am embarrassed to say I have already squandered all of my sixes, my friend. so sorry. Bob
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you my very first Spenserian sonnet. I appreciate the kind words.
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Good for you, Jim. Bob