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Your Post Pandemic Reveal

Should auld acquaintance be forgot?

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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I enjoy reading your piece of New Year's Eve confession.

Yes. Covid19 was serious killer in 2020 and still is in early 2021. I'm optimistic and are very much looking forward to the spring so I can travel again.

Life is not bad though.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Lisa. I think writers cope better during the quarantine because we are used to having a solitary nature.
reply by Jasmine Girl on 04-Jan-2021
    I have gotten so much writing done. I finished my second book called "Chinese Lolita", a short story collection of my mother side of family and I can publish it soon. I also wrote more than 50 poems and started a screen play.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Yeah, It sounds like you've been busy. Feels good, doesn't it?
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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Jay:

I was following you fine as you were outlining your process
of setting your "rituals" for the upcoming year. Allocating two
hours just before the end of the year certainly would require a
person to stay focused so as to get the job done.

After your comments on Pentatonix, I thought your piece
took on more of a shotgun approach. Even so, I enjoyed what
you had to say,

Rdfrdmom2

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    I'm glad you read my piece with an open mind. Thanks for your comments and the stars.
Comment from kmoss
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I commend you for having followed a ritual for fifty years. Impressive. This is well written. It takes the reader into your mind for a moment. I like the repeated slashes thrown at the media. I like how you talked about spring really being the time of change and resolution. I've never really thought about that. The date shouldn't have anything to do with it. If your want to change something, change it! I write that sentence knowing I have failed to take my own advice many times and 2021 will not be any different. Happy New Year!

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    A sixer! Thanks Krystal. I also believe in making change whenever it is desired or needed. I just do well when I have a special focus day. Now being changed to the spring equinox. Again, thanks.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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This passage captured my attention, as usual, the TV fake world put lots of negativity and less hope and optimism in our lives:"COVID--the disease that robbed the world of more than 1.7 million people was renamed "2020" by NBC, with the drop of a gigantic glass ball. I would not have been surprised if, through the magic of TV, that ball had shattered into 1.7 million pieces as it crushed the life out of those four numbers, lined like blindfolded prisoners at its base. "

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Hi, Iza. I enjoyed that part as well. Thank you for reading and commenting. Of course the stars too!