Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Sandra,

Nice job - loved the insertion of the architect info again. Just right. I shuddered inside when it was revealed that her recording device had been found. When she had been asking all those questions, I was like - cool, she's found a way to turn it back on. -Yuck- No, she was just asking for her own benefit.

Just a couple of notes:
1.) The room itself was empty, apart from a table with a red laptop, the same colour as her own, placed in the middle.
--> not really true, is it?

2.) Drink some more water, that will help. I need you to be clear(-)headed(.)'

3.) I want all the plans you've drawn. I might need them in the future.(')

4.) wanted now was for him to guess she'd already met his 'Grant(').

Nicely done. Thanks a bunch! I am pleased that you'll be ending the year as a recognized writer. Very appropriate.






This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2020

---

reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020

Thank you my dear friend. I made a right boo-boo with this part. I wrote it out on my Google docs. and copied it over to my MS Word to do my editing. AND THEN posted the wrong one!!! I tell you, Robyn, I'm needing a brain transplant urgently! Thank you so much for this.
2) I hadn't hyphenated 'clear-headed' but have now. :)
4) that started out as '...she'd already met his half-brother...
then I changed it to ... met Grant, but forgot take out 'his'. But have now. :)
I didn't understand number one, though, so I've left it as it is.

Thank you again, my friend. Have a wonderful Christmas and a much healthier 2021 for everyone. :)) Sandra xx

reply by robyn corum on 20-Dec-2020

hahaha You said the room was empty - with only a table and red laptop. BUT then you share more - a bed and I don't remember what all.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

So what is Colin going to do, killing her would be incredibly stupid, Monica already knows she was already with him, and now he's getting desperate, I wonder what we do from here? I honestly can't see a solution to this one, kidnapping is a capital crime, murder is worse, the only thing is, Tania gets away. Well done, I look forward to a solution Sandra, well done Sandra, blessings, Roy

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2020

---

reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020

Thank you, dear Roy, for another lovely review. It doesn't look good for Tania, does it? :(

How is the virus effecting you in Australia? Can you have a normal Christmas with all the family? We can't here. In fact they have tightened our rules, giving us just Christmas Day, and then back to the new tier system. Most believe we will be in complete lockdown after the Christmas. Who would have believed this would be happening still after all these months. Whatever it is, I wish you the very best Christmas and I wish for everyone a healthy, 2021. Take care my friend and stay safe. Sandra xx

reply by royowen on 20-Dec-2020

We?ve had few deaths and at the moment the problem is expats returning, but no pretty normal, we are all having family gatherings, the government has handled it well,