Betrayal
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-A great chapter, Sandra.
-I enjoyed reading it, and
it flowed well with excellent
descriptive detail.
-You give us a vivid picture of
Tania as she prepares for this lunch
with Colin, and she looks quite smart!
-You also did a great job with the
conversation at the restaurant.
-Tania did a good acting job,
and Colin was certainly feeding her lines!
-You show him for what he is, a cad.
-He certainly pumps her for information,
and Tania knowingly plays right in his hand.
-You end with a good cliffhanger and
make us wonder what kind of plan Colin has-
perhaps hacking into her computer?!
-Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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-A great chapter, Sandra.
-I enjoyed reading it, and
it flowed well with excellent
descriptive detail.
-You give us a vivid picture of
Tania as she prepares for this lunch
with Colin, and she looks quite smart!
-You also did a great job with the
conversation at the restaurant.
-Tania did a good acting job,
and Colin was certainly feeding her lines!
-You show him for what he is, a cad.
-He certainly pumps her for information,
and Tania knowingly plays right in his hand.
-You end with a good cliffhanger and
make us wonder what kind of plan Colin has-
perhaps hacking into her computer?!
-Well done.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for those lovely stars, and this fabulous review, Pam. I'm so pleased you liked this part, it leads on to.... 🤣
No, he's not clever enough to hack into Tania's laptop, he could only get into it before by setting the system up while he was still seeing her. But, where there's a will, there's a way, so they say. Thank you, my dear friend. Warm hugs and love :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving, Sandra. I believe there will be a way because then there wouldn't be suspense! Maybe he breaks into her apartment:)