Comment from Carmen Ducharme

Excellent

Nicely written chapter .I haven't read your previous chapters yet but on reading this one .I will definitely read the rest .Have a great day ! God Bless!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020

Hello, Carmen, thank you for reading this chapter, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you do come back again, it will be nice to read your comments on how you think it's coming along. You have a lovely day, too! :))Sandra xx

reply by Carmen Ducharme on 01-Nov-2020

Hi Sandra it was my pleasure .Thank you I look forward to reading them and would be more than happy to comment .Have a beautiful day !

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020

That is great! Thank you. xx

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I am really enjoying this story. I see why you are number one in the rankings. You are an excellent writer. I read some of the story you wrote for you grandson as well.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020

Thank you, Beth, that is such a nice compliment. Eric loves his books, lol. He likes to be a hero. I'm also pleased you are enjoying this story. Warm hugs, Sandra. xx

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

I read this chapter with interest. I am just a fortnight old on this site and have missed the earlier chapters. But as a stand-alone work, this held my interest. I like the way you have written the conversation which takes the story forward. Thanks for sharing!

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 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020

Hi, and welcome to FS, Seshadri. Thank you so much for reading part 6, it's quite early in the story, so I hope you come back to read more. Thank you for your kind review, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the conversation. Warm hugs, Sandra

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

Hmmm, Grant is realizing the truth about Tania. Now we can get to the bottom of the situation, although sticky and get to the business of romance. LOL

'I've promised not to mention her name, or anything about the plansï¹?' (plans.')

'Of course. That's not a problem. I'll e-mail you the details. As for how long, as soon as possible. So, it's a yes, then? You'll do it?' Again, Grant listened to the silence. (no need for the large space before silence)

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020

Thank you so much for the lovely six stars, and helpful review, Barbara. I can't get rid of that gap between the 'silence' I tried taking it out and putting it back in again, but that did nothing. As it wasn't an important line, I've taken it right out now, but will leave it in my own copy. Those ï¹ are so annoying, I've not had them for a while and now they're back! I'm glad you were my first review and I've cleared it up. Thanks, Barbara. As for the romance, it's only been four days since they met. Lol. Thanks again, my friend. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying the story. :)) Sandra xxx