Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Football Chapter 2 part 2"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, again you've caught my attention. It is a great continuation and I'm looking forward to see where you're going to take this story. Katherine is speaking her mind and I like that. However, Mr Frost is a jerk. Well written.
I'm glad you had a lovely break. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Hi Barbara, again you've caught my attention. It is a great continuation and I'm looking forward to see where you're going to take this story. Katherine is speaking her mind and I like that. However, Mr Frost is a jerk. Well written.
I'm glad you had a lovely break. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Mr. Frost will get worse. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
How about "Counting the moments," she's a maths teacher, for a title. I love this episode, and like your main characters, you choose some marvellously feisty female characters, able to stand up for themselves in an hostile male environment, I really enjoyed your new story and a great new character(s), well done, blessings Roy
Typo : I promise it'll be handled (it)
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How about "Counting the moments," she's a maths teacher, for a title. I love this episode, and like your main characters, you choose some marvellously feisty female characters, able to stand up for themselves in an hostile male environment, I really enjoyed your new story and a great new character(s), well done, blessings Roy
Typo : I promise it'll be handled (it)
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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I thought I took that words out. I'll go recheck in case I forgot to save. Thank you for the kind review.
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Well done
Comment from Shirley McLain
A well written chapter with lots of tension and action. I did not find but one error to suggest about. Have a great evening. Shirley
"I promise it'll be handled it." (I don't think you need the word it)
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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A well written chapter with lots of tension and action. I did not find but one error to suggest about. Have a great evening. Shirley
"I promise it'll be handled it." (I don't think you need the word it)
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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You're right. I will fix it. Thank you for the catch.