eviction
Six word poetry contest44 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A gorgeous image.
-I haven't seen you on FS
in quite a while.
-Hope you are doing well.
-You have used your 6 words well.
-The topic is good, and the
imagery is effective.
-I also like the personification
of the leaves.
-In your title, you left out the
'c.' I was wondering what
evition meant:)
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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-A gorgeous image.
-I haven't seen you on FS
in quite a while.
-Hope you are doing well.
-You have used your 6 words well.
-The topic is good, and the
imagery is effective.
-I also like the personification
of the leaves.
-In your title, you left out the
'c.' I was wondering what
evition meant:)
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Yes, thank you for catching that one as well as the awesome review. I have missed everyone and sad to hear of those who've passed. This has been an extreme year for all. My cousin(like a mother to me)was diagnosed with stage 3 and 4 cancer in her breasts. The Chemo nearly took her as she is 71. I was furloughed for the last 3 months of her treatments and spent my days taking her to her treatments and what not. Her husband doesn't drive, so helped with things they needed. It was awful to watch, but she had them both removed and she has made an astonishing recovery. I am happy to be back and look forward to writing and reviewing.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I like your sentence. It is catchy in its own way. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I like your sentence. It is catchy in its own way. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Raul. I enjoyed the challenge.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Janet Foor
A creative and clever play on words in this delightful 6 word poem.
Perfect picture For the well written piece.
One note - check spelling of title
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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A creative and clever play on words in this delightful 6 word poem.
Perfect picture For the well written piece.
One note - check spelling of title
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Janet for catching the title debacle. Thank you for the awesome review as well.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I must say you did a wonderful job with this poem with so few words.
You captured my attention from the star, the photo is so beautiful
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
stay safe and be blessed
Cookie
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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I must say you did a wonderful job with this poem with so few words.
You captured my attention from the star, the photo is so beautiful
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
stay safe and be blessed
Cookie
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Cookie for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Hi Neonewman! I really like your poem! Is there any way you can correct the typo in your poems' title? From Evition to Eviction?
I love the way you've metaphorical referred to the falling leaves as "summer's eviction" - very clever!
Susan
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Hi Neonewman! I really like your poem! Is there any way you can correct the typo in your poems' title? From Evition to Eviction?
I love the way you've metaphorical referred to the falling leaves as "summer's eviction" - very clever!
Susan
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Susan for the awesome review. Title corrected, thank you for catching this.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry. I like how you used the word 'fall' as in leaves falling but also allude to the Fall season. I like how your personified Summer and leaves. Check the spelling in the title. Your image is beautiful. Perhaps make the font a bit larger--your choice.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry. I like how you used the word 'fall' as in leaves falling but also allude to the Fall season. I like how your personified Summer and leaves. Check the spelling in the title. Your image is beautiful. Perhaps make the font a bit larger--your choice.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Jan. I enjoyed the challenge this one brought. Thank you for catching the title issue.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Jodie Hammerstein
Wow so much to take from that, it's inspiring thankyou. The picture was a great choice. It all ties into the poem, even the one big tree by itself it's like it's awaiting its fate.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Wow so much to take from that, it's inspiring thankyou. The picture was a great choice. It all ties into the poem, even the one big tree by itself it's like it's awaiting its fate.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Jodie for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 6 word poem speaks the kingly approach through falling of leaves to the poor summer to cause eviction from the kingdom; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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This 6 word poem speaks the kingly approach through falling of leaves to the poor summer to cause eviction from the kingdom; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review, Alcreator. Loved the challenge this one presented.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, this poem its winner, I kove it it's perfect. Poor summer evicted by the aristocratic fall. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Wow, this poem its winner, I kove it it's perfect. Poor summer evicted by the aristocratic fall. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Iza for this exceptional review. What an inspiration the six stars present.
God bless
Steve
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Your word eviction at the top is missing the[ c], Steve. The poem tells the story well. What a beautiful carpet the tree laid down for midnight snacks and a blanket of comfort for many unknown creatures. Well done my friend. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Your word eviction at the top is missing the[ c], Steve. The poem tells the story well. What a beautiful carpet the tree laid down for midnight snacks and a blanket of comfort for many unknown creatures. Well done my friend. Nancy:)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Nancy for the excellent review and for catching the missing "c". I love the thoughts you've shared on the leaves blanketing the creatures below.
God bless
Steve