Poems from a Pensive Poet
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Comment from Bill Schott
This No Letter A poem, Mirrors, reflects on aging and its many signs that are clearly visible to us and everyone else. Staying young is not a winning goal, but making our time count certainly is.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This No Letter A poem, Mirrors, reflects on aging and its many signs that are clearly visible to us and everyone else. Staying young is not a winning goal, but making our time count certainly is.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you Bill, I do appreciate you reviewing it and your nice comments.
Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I know it's horrible growing old. I can't imagine getting any older, but I know it will happen. That's what happens naturally. This would have been a great contest entry.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I know it's horrible growing old. I can't imagine getting any older, but I know it will happen. That's what happens naturally. This would have been a great contest entry.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments. I don't think that contest was out there over a day. It sure did fill up fast. It isn't exactly easy getting all the As out. LOL
Beth
Comment from Michele Harber
Until you pointed it out, I read this poem totally unaware of what it was missing (the letter "A") and, instead, saw only what it had: excellent rhyme and rhythm, and a wonderful attitude, expressed perfectly in your last line. I'm sorry you missed the contest deadline, as I strongly suspect you'd have had a very good chance of winning.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Until you pointed it out, I read this poem totally unaware of what it was missing (the letter "A") and, instead, saw only what it had: excellent rhyme and rhythm, and a wonderful attitude, expressed perfectly in your last line. I'm sorry you missed the contest deadline, as I strongly suspect you'd have had a very good chance of winning.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much Michele, I really appreciate the review and comments and especially the six stars. It makes me glad I went ahead and posted it.
Beth
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I'm glad you did too. I really enjoyed it.
Comment from Mistydawn
What a shame you didn't make it. I'm glad you decided to share it anyway. Your poem is well-written, interesting, very truthful. Youth doesn't seem to last too long, not long enough, lol. I'd like to believe I'm wiser now than I was back then.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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What a shame you didn't make it. I'm glad you decided to share it anyway. Your poem is well-written, interesting, very truthful. Youth doesn't seem to last too long, not long enough, lol. I'd like to believe I'm wiser now than I was back then.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. It wasn't easy trying to get all those a's out so I wish i'd signed up when I saw it.
Beth