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See me, I am lost

Everyday, every city we see people lost

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Comment from Bichon
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This was quite an interesting read, even though it was only a short poem the story was evident and told very well. I wish no one out there was lost, we all deserve to find ourselves, no matter what.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
    Bichon, thank you!
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi A great poem for this unusual contest requirement I think your 5-7-5 lines portray the image Very aptly Good luck in this contest should fo well Cheers Christine

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
    Chrissy thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from Chelle_GH
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Art work and composition matches the author's subject. I am really amazed to see & read write-ups with few words yet it strongly convey its message to the reader. Wishing you all the best in the contest!

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
    Chelle, thank you for your time taken to read and comment, we have far too many lost souls on our city streets. Seemingly no immediate solutions.