Leaves Curling
An equinox spins Fall closer more.41 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Writer. Good job on the requirements. Your syllable count is correct per line. The image pairs well and your message is clear. No curling leaves--just 100+ temps here.
Best wishes.
Thank for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Writer. Good job on the requirements. Your syllable count is correct per line. The image pairs well and your message is clear. No curling leaves--just 100+ temps here.
Best wishes.
Thank for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Jan, these days are soon to pass, cool air is on the horizon.
Comment from royowen
I haven't seen a lanturn poetic utterance for awhile. And yours poetically sound with a gentle message that is full appreciated and a good shape for this poem, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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I haven't seen a lanturn poetic utterance for awhile. And yours poetically sound with a gentle message that is full appreciated and a good shape for this poem, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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I thank you so much Roy!
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Bless you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Pretty presentation. I never heard of this type of poem. I love Japanese poetry. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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An equinox spins Fall closer more.
Leaves Curling
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Pretty presentation. I never heard of this type of poem. I love Japanese poetry. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Gypsy, I am learning to love haiku also.
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Oh, good.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lantern poem. The first signs of Autumn first shows in the leaves that starts to curl up and the warm temperatures start cooling down.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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A very well-written Lantern poem. The first signs of Autumn first shows in the leaves that starts to curl up and the warm temperatures start cooling down.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Sandra, thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This lantern poem, Leaves Curling, has the proper formatting and brings the summer to an end with autumn creeping up quickly to assume the season.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This lantern poem, Leaves Curling, has the proper formatting and brings the summer to an end with autumn creeping up quickly to assume the season.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Bill, thanks alot! Have a great Labor Day weekend!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this sad poem and its art. I was going to write something like this but you went ahead of me. Yes. The leaves' falling or curling signals the beginning of the fall and coming of the winter.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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I like this sad poem and its art. I was going to write something like this but you went ahead of me. Yes. The leaves' falling or curling signals the beginning of the fall and coming of the winter.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Lisa, Smiling back with appreciation for your review and comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Lantern poem, perchance speaks an equinox spins Fall closer, though leaves are seen curling and summers end draws very near; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this poem. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This Lantern poem, perchance speaks an equinox spins Fall closer, though leaves are seen curling and summers end draws very near; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this poem. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Yes, my dear friend, thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Your syllable count is correct and you've chosen a great focus here! ;) Your shape of your poem, however, does not quite make that 'lantern' shape... The perfect pic to match your verse! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck... :)
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Your syllable count is correct and you've chosen a great focus here! ;) Your shape of your poem, however, does not quite make that 'lantern' shape... The perfect pic to match your verse! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck... :)
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Yvette, thank you
Comment from equestrik
A great poem for the coming Autumn season. You picture goes so well with the writing and definitely adds to the experience of the reading. A very nice fall read.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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A great poem for the coming Autumn season. You picture goes so well with the writing and definitely adds to the experience of the reading. A very nice fall read.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and good topic.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery,
"leaves curling."
-Good concluding lines
showing that fall will soon be here!
-I am ready for a little cooler weather, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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-Nice image and good topic.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery,
"leaves curling."
-Good concluding lines
showing that fall will soon be here!
-I am ready for a little cooler weather, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Pa, thanks!
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You are welcome.