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Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7

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Comment from Bill Pinder
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Yvette, Excellent poem that matches a very unique picture with your well chosen words. Thanks for sharing this writing that speaks of positive energy in nature. Bill

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
    Thanx so much, Bill, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from amada
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What you write here is very beautiful, spiritual and very well in accord to the rhyme of nature. I love nature, it is one of my best inspirations. I wish I knew more to say. lessings.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
    Thanx so much, amada, for stopping by on this shorty -- great to hear from you! ;) Enjoy the rest of the weekend out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Enfolding Eternity
by Y. M. Roger

Hello, Yvette,

Beautiful couplet for the renga book. Excellent chapter that fits nicely with my haiku. I noticed you wrote the word nature in your couplet, which is my haiku. We are not supposed to repeat words from one chapter to the next.

Regardless all strife
Life goes on and (nature) reigns
Divine love cycle

Thank you very much for adding a chapter. Well done my friend.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
    My apologies again, Gypsy. Thank you for the five stars, though! :) Yvette
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 15-Aug-2020
    No worries, most chapters need little adjustments here and there... it's to be expected with such book. You always do a great job.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Boom!
Ah! Yvette!
Found it!
Holding on to it!
Won't let go; I promise!
Beautiful couplet that goes along with a tanka I am just about to post!
Damn, girl! Like minds!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
    Hooray!! :) :) You have managed to make me smile here - wasn't sure it would happen a whole lot today... but here it is! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
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In times like we are "enjoying" at the moment, one will find that good things will be easy to see, They stand out like a candle in absolute darkness. Beautifully written my friend, excellent job, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
    Thanx so much, Roy, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
reply by royowen on 15-Aug-2020
    Bless you Yvette,
Comment from lightink
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Thank you so much for the superb message! Nature's rhythm is fully alive and we can find it within and without! I love it, and it does help me remember! :)

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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
    Thanx so much, Jyoti, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raul1
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I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. I like your piece of poetry. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice work! I like it. Thanks for sharing!

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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your review, Raul - always good to hear from you!! ;) Yvette
reply by Raul1 on 11-Aug-2020
    You're welcome.