Time
For the one I love for all time.33 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Sally, a good four lines perfectly written true to form 1/5/5/9. Well worded with a rhythmic sound - time, speeds, slows down, stands still.
A nice romantic last line. An all round good poem - well done and good luck in the contest. Love and regards Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hello Sally, a good four lines perfectly written true to form 1/5/5/9. Well worded with a rhythmic sound - time, speeds, slows down, stands still.
A nice romantic last line. An all round good poem - well done and good luck in the contest. Love and regards Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, precious lady. It is greatly appreciated.
Blessings to you always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh, how romantic. I notice it stands still when I'm at work or in a boring meeting which they all seem to be. =] Well done as always my dear. I hope you do well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Oh, how romantic. I notice it stands still when I'm at work or in a boring meeting which they all seem to be. =] Well done as always my dear. I hope you do well in the contest.
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and compliments, dear Rox. It is greatly appreciated.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Sal!
You have expressed much truth in your four line poem = truth that, perhaps, may or may not be experienced by many. But I know it certainy resonates with me!
Creative and appreciated!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hello Sal!
You have expressed much truth in your four line poem = truth that, perhaps, may or may not be experienced by many. But I know it certainy resonates with me!
Creative and appreciated!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my poem. I'm always so honored to see your name and read your reviews. Blessings always,
Sally XOs....