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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "origami doves"An artful mix of poetic forms.
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a cute and lovely poem. Children who are taught origami seem like they are more peaceful especially when they are bedridden. Doves are easy to make. Sweet!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is a cute and lovely poem. Children who are taught origami seem like they are more peaceful especially when they are bedridden. Doves are easy to make. Sweet!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I have always appreciated origami but I don't actually do it myself...takes away too much time for writing. lol
Even when confined, positive activities prove to be extremely helpful especially in something like recovering from an accident and having to stay in bed.
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You are so right!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is such a clever presentation. Is there really a bedridden child making these oregami doves? If so he/she is doing a smashing job. Love it.
Ralf
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is such a clever presentation. Is there really a bedridden child making these oregami doves? If so he/she is doing a smashing job. Love it.
Ralf
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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It is a totally fabricated situation, Ralf, but it might actually be true somewhere. (I have a huge imagination.) lol Thank you greatly for a super review, my friend! Janet :-)
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You do have a super imagination, that's for sure.
Ralf
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lol there are times when it gets me in trouble. :0)
Comment from RodG
Wow! This narrative tanka tells us quite a bit in only five short lines. It is easy for us to visualize the sick child in bed fashioning paper doves. The doves themselves quickly become a symbol of HOPE as we worry about the child's future. Rod
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Wow! This narrative tanka tells us quite a bit in only five short lines. It is easy for us to visualize the sick child in bed fashioning paper doves. The doves themselves quickly become a symbol of HOPE as we worry about the child's future. Rod
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you greatly, Rod. I truly appreciate your positive comments and the mention of hope. Please stay safe and well, Janet
Comment from Sally Law
A sad on here once it sunk in. I hope this little one depicted here is feeling better. A fine tanks and uniquely formatted, dear Janet. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest
Sally xoxo
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A sad on here once it sunk in. I hope this little one depicted here is feeling better. A fine tanks and uniquely formatted, dear Janet. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest
Sally xoxo
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you greatly, Sally. I am happy to say this posting is fantasy and, to my knowledge, not a true life situation. I appreciate you reading it and sharing your thoughts. Hugs, Janet