Sunday Funday
An uplifting poem for these times.49 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author of your 5-7-9 saying , put your favotie music on your Hifi my; with your lovely picture and your excellent and relaxing words, I would be delighted to join you, in spirit.
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Hello unknown author of your 5-7-9 saying , put your favotie music on your Hifi my; with your lovely picture and your excellent and relaxing words, I would be delighted to join you, in spirit.
Gert
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review and friendship, dear Gert.
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You are welcome who ever you are?
Gert
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you for stopping by and reading my work. Your comments mean a lot to me.
Comment from mermaids
Your poem is fun to read and sounds like a good idea, wine, bread cheese and feet high on rose couch. You create a comforting scene with your words and it is a great poem in these stressful times.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Your poem is fun to read and sounds like a good idea, wine, bread cheese and feet high on rose couch. You create a comforting scene with your words and it is a great poem in these stressful times.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Yes, mermaid, we all need a little fun time, even in our imagination. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I love your poem! It is very creative! In such short words, you were able to describe how some people relax. It is so beautifully written! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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I love your poem! It is very creative! In such short words, you were able to describe how some people relax. It is so beautifully written! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you for liking mylidea of having a terrific Sunday; pandemic or no pandemic. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your fun poem for the contest, Mystery Author. Your words are descriptive--I could see everything as I read it. You set the scene well. It is relaxing which we all need in these troubled times.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed your fun poem for the contest, Mystery Author. Your words are descriptive--I could see everything as I read it. You set the scene well. It is relaxing which we all need in these troubled times.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading my lines on Sundays, Jan.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the 5-7-9 poem contest
which creates a very soothing feeling as we adjust to these difficult times.
I smiled at the inclusion of hi fi, haven't seen that term in many years,
but it bring back memories.
Excellent imagery in descriptions.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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You've written an excellent poem for the 5-7-9 poem contest
which creates a very soothing feeling as we adjust to these difficult times.
I smiled at the inclusion of hi fi, haven't seen that term in many years,
but it bring back memories.
Excellent imagery in descriptions.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you Robert for reading and liking the content of my poem.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-9 Poem about a relaxing evening with your favourite music, drinks, and snacks with your feet high on the rose couch. We all need a piece of our own heaven where we can do as we wish.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-9 Poem about a relaxing evening with your favourite music, drinks, and snacks with your feet high on the rose couch. We all need a piece of our own heaven where we can do as we wish.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you,Sandra. I truly appreciate stopping by and reading my work.
Comment from HarryT
A fine expression of a quiet relaxing time incorporating both sight, taste, feeling and sound, quite an accomplishment in so few words. Like the softness of the selected picture to go with the poem. Enjoy the mood conveyed.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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A fine expression of a quiet relaxing time incorporating both sight, taste, feeling and sound, quite an accomplishment in so few words. Like the softness of the selected picture to go with the poem. Enjoy the mood conveyed.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you Harry for ccommenting in my work.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I am stunned. This morning I have been thinking, for no good reason,
"A loaf of bread, a glass of wine and you."
Then I start reviewing and lo and behold here is your poem about bread and wine. What do you think? Mental telepathy? I like the presentation by the way but I am still stunned.
Ralf
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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I am stunned. This morning I have been thinking, for no good reason,
"A loaf of bread, a glass of wine and you."
Then I start reviewing and lo and behold here is your poem about bread and wine. What do you think? Mental telepathy? I like the presentation by the way but I am still stunned.
Ralf
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you Ralph for the very fun review. Enjoy!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very good image.
-The syllable count is good.
-A good topic and very
good imagery as you
describe how you will
enjoy your evening.
-It sounds very relaxing.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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-A very good image.
-The syllable count is good.
-A good topic and very
good imagery as you
describe how you will
enjoy your evening.
-It sounds very relaxing.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you Pam for your great review to my Sunday poem.
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You are very welcome.