Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Since we have read the ending of his book, we know that God will definitely win in the end.
I agree, drive-by shooters are cowards.

Good 5/7/5 poem

Blessing
Janet

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020

I appreciate your comments very much. It is definitely a dark world where things like this are happening. I live in Memphis and drive-by shootings are frequent. Keep looking up, the world one day will be different! :-) Janet

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi Janet. This is undoubtedly a very profound statement in view of our times. I have to be onest with your dear friend. Then red text is washed out in the black background.

I thought it might just be my eyes but checked with a couple of friends and they agree. You may want to make some sort of change. Perhaps a red background with black text would work.

Bless you, I like ths 5-7-5

: ) Bob

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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

Thanks greatly, Bob. I changed the font color to white and it does show up better. :-)

reply by Mastery on 09-Jul-2020

Much better, Jan. :) Bob

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

:-) !!

reply by Mastery on 09-Jul-2020

: ) Same to ya' Bob

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Very wise poem and well said: drive-shoot and then walk around like nothing happened and let God pick up the pieces of your mess. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020

Thank you so much for your review and comments. It is difficult to understand the mentality of people who do stuff like this. They have no concern for the families of victims either.