Collection of Writer's Tips #1
Chapter One ~ The Eyes35 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
Thank you, Sally. I see you got about all the eyes that I can see. :) Your mood should be sparkling with all the help you've given me a FanStorian wanna-be writer. I have been told that I have bedroom eyes. Must not have washed my face. :) Mine are light-brown star-filled eyes always wanting, but never getting there. ;) Thank you for all the help, I will use some of your described words in writing.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Sally. I see you got about all the eyes that I can see. :) Your mood should be sparkling with all the help you've given me a FanStorian wanna-be writer. I have been told that I have bedroom eyes. Must not have washed my face. :) Mine are light-brown star-filled eyes always wanting, but never getting there. ;) Thank you for all the help, I will use some of your described words in writing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you, dear Jose. I hope this continues to help you in the days ahead. I have a second one coming soon. Sending my best today as always, Sally XOs....
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Sally, this is a vividly descriptive, lively, appealing piece. You are very creative. I don't think I could have come up with this many examples.
You have covered all possibilities, I think.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Sally, this is a vividly descriptive, lively, appealing piece. You are very creative. I don't think I could have come up with this many examples.
You have covered all possibilities, I think.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. The second chapter is coming soon. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs.....
Comment from Bill Schott
This article, Collection of Writer's Tips #1, is a neat beginning to your sharing of these writing hints' The EYES definitely have it here.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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This article, Collection of Writer's Tips #1, is a neat beginning to your sharing of these writing hints' The EYES definitely have it here.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review and encouragement, dear Bill. Your eyes above have prompted new descriptions.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from BethShelby
This is a wonderful collection of information that will be a great help to anyone aspiring to be a writer. I sometimes forget to put in all those little details that make writing sparkle and I'm glad you are doing this. I look forward to more..
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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This is a wonderful collection of information that will be a great help to anyone aspiring to be a writer. I sometimes forget to put in all those little details that make writing sparkle and I'm glad you are doing this. I look forward to more..
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the encouraging review and kind comments, dear Beth.
Sal XOs....
Comment from Cindy Decker
Sally,
Your first lesson was truly enlightening: I loved all the examples, and all the ways a person can describe a face.
This is very interesting and informative.
I can't wait for the next installment.
A F A
Good luck in this endeavor!
Cindy
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Sally,
Your first lesson was truly enlightening: I loved all the examples, and all the ways a person can describe a face.
This is very interesting and informative.
I can't wait for the next installment.
A F A
Good luck in this endeavor!
Cindy
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Cindy.
Sal XOs.....