The Longing
It begs to question.71 total reviews
Comment from IndefinitelySmallx
Wow. Stunning. A very good entry and deserving of first place in this contest. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing this and good luck in future contests!
Wow. Stunning. A very good entry and deserving of first place in this contest. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing this and good luck in future contests!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from Neonewman
One of the many questions we have in life. With no answer, or at least not for mine. Love the artwork as it pairs well with this timeless piece you have offered. Congrats on the win, well deserved.
God bless
Steve
One of the many questions we have in life. With no answer, or at least not for mine. Love the artwork as it pairs well with this timeless piece you have offered. Congrats on the win, well deserved.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from robyn corum
Opal,
Oooo... A very thoughtful piece. One which invites the reader to step beyond what's written on the page and inject a bit of their own selves inside. Nice! I can see why you garnered the prize. Congrats!
Opal,
Oooo... A very thoughtful piece. One which invites the reader to step beyond what's written on the page and inject a bit of their own selves inside. Nice! I can see why you garnered the prize. Congrats!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from Tina Crute
I can see why this won! I would call this an ensemble because all the parts of the presentation work together...the colors, background, even the emotion in the art, matching the emotion in your words. Well done, newby! Welcome to the family:)
TIna
I can see why this won! I would call this an ensemble because all the parts of the presentation work together...the colors, background, even the emotion in the art, matching the emotion in your words. Well done, newby! Welcome to the family:)
TIna
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Welcome aboard there are some nice people on the suite
I love your artwork that you choose to go with your poem, they're a perfect match.
You captured my attention form the start .
When you find the answer please tell me why?
Have a safe and blessed day, stay on praying ground
Cookie
Welcome aboard there are some nice people on the suite
I love your artwork that you choose to go with your poem, they're a perfect match.
You captured my attention form the start .
When you find the answer please tell me why?
Have a safe and blessed day, stay on praying ground
Cookie
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from teols2016
Welcome aboard and congradulations on your first victory. You raise some important questions in your piece for which there are no easy answers. Well done.
Welcome aboard and congradulations on your first victory. You raise some important questions in your piece for which there are no easy answers. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a very creative and innovative as thoughtful poem telling the true feeling of losing and gaining thoughts and experience of expression; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
This is a very creative and innovative as thoughtful poem telling the true feeling of losing and gaining thoughts and experience of expression; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from Jeffrey Mitchell
I like your style, of writing, it keeps you guessing of what you are going to say next. I also like to congratulate you for winning the New Arrival Poetry Contest. I will be looking to read more of your poems.
I like your style, of writing, it keeps you guessing of what you are going to say next. I also like to congratulate you for winning the New Arrival Poetry Contest. I will be looking to read more of your poems.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
Comment from dragonpoet
First of all, welcome to the site.
The picture and the words match perfectly. A good question. I think yearning is a kind of hope, maybe. We yearn for how we want the world to be.
Congrats on the well deserved win.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
First of all, welcome to the site.
The picture and the words match perfectly. A good question. I think yearning is a kind of hope, maybe. We yearn for how we want the world to be.
Congrats on the well deserved win.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your win! Powerful poem. Welcome to StoryLand--my hat's off to you--I've never garnered so much as honorable mention in about 2 dozen contests. Cheers. LIZ
Congrats on your win! Powerful poem. Welcome to StoryLand--my hat's off to you--I've never garnered so much as honorable mention in about 2 dozen contests. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020