Memory Lane
A Free Verse poem...39 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Diana. This is a very well written free verse reflecting on Life and times past. Are are some revealing sections and some fond memories I give the poem depth.
It really is a good one. Well done.
Robert
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Hello Diana. This is a very well written free verse reflecting on Life and times past. Are are some revealing sections and some fond memories I give the poem depth.
It really is a good one. Well done.
Robert
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks Robert! appreciate you took this journey with me! :) xoxoxo
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You're welcome
Comment from Teri7
Diana, This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned about memories - some good and some not. You used great descriptive words. You used very nice art work. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
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Diana, This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned about memories - some good and some not. You used great descriptive words. You used very nice art work. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you Teri! Appreciate you enjoyed the journey!! :) xoxoxo
Comment from January L'Angelle
Diana, I'm always happy when I get a notice that you have a new poem to read. This one is really wonderful. I love your stroll down memory lane. Its honest and real. Well done. -January L.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Diana, I'm always happy when I get a notice that you have a new poem to read. This one is really wonderful. I love your stroll down memory lane. Its honest and real. Well done. -January L.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks so much! It could be filled with so much more now that I have grandchildren and great-grandchildren as well. These are memories though that are more current that the ones here. appreciate you took that journey with me. :) xoxoxoxo
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A beautiful free verse Diana as you travel memory lane from the now right back through the decades to your childhood. I particularly liked the verse about being on your grandpa's knee. Cheers Valda
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A beautiful free verse Diana as you travel memory lane from the now right back through the decades to your childhood. I particularly liked the verse about being on your grandpa's knee. Cheers Valda
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you, Valda! I sincerely appreciate your taking this journey with me and for the shiny stars!!
Comment from Drew Delaney
So sorry to read of your fatherless childhood, but fortunate to have grandfather's lap. I was so lucky to have a good father who cared for me. Our childhood's seem to be with us for the rest of our lives. Some good memories and some not so good. Nicely written, Diana!
Drew xx
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So sorry to read of your fatherless childhood, but fortunate to have grandfather's lap. I was so lucky to have a good father who cared for me. Our childhood's seem to be with us for the rest of our lives. Some good memories and some not so good. Nicely written, Diana!
Drew xx
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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thanks so much for reading! my father was a bit of a vagabond and wasn't around when i was young. So I am grateful for grandparents who stepped up to the plate when he did not. We were closer in later years, but he took his life at 49, so i still ended up missing him all over again. Appreciate you took this journey with me and can know me a little better! xoxoxo
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Life has its cruel times. Better to think on the good times I guess. To better days! 🍸
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for taking us along on your poetic walk through your Memory Lane. Those memories make you more uniquely you than your fingerprints. And we can always see how God carried us through some of those hard times.
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Thank you for taking us along on your poetic walk through your Memory Lane. Those memories make you more uniquely you than your fingerprints. And we can always see how God carried us through some of those hard times.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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He absolutely carries us! No doubt about that! appreciate you took this journey with me and for your lovely comment! xoxoxo
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was really well written. I think free verse poems sound good with shorter lines, and you got that. This flows well together, and it's really good of you to share it with us. Keep up the good writing.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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This was really well written. I think free verse poems sound good with shorter lines, and you got that. This flows well together, and it's really good of you to share it with us. Keep up the good writing.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
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Thank you Amanda! appreciate you stopped to enjoy the journey with me! xoxoxo
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A trip down the memory line can be taugh because is bringing up the good and the bad in one spot. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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A trip down the memory line can be taugh because is bringing up the good and the bad in one spot. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Yes, it sure can be tough. But I am grateful for the many blessings that I can look back on. I appreciate you took this journey with me! xoxoxo
Comment from June Sargent
An umbrella on a rainy day - a beautiful way to illustrate the comfort felt when we stroll down memory lane. Thank you for inviting us along. This was a great example of free verse - something I haven't mastered myself!
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reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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An umbrella on a rainy day - a beautiful way to illustrate the comfort felt when we stroll down memory lane. Thank you for inviting us along. This was a great example of free verse - something I haven't mastered myself!
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Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you!! Appreciate you strolled down my memory lane with me! I do cherish all the times of my life for sure! xoxoxo
