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The A-Z of animals and facts

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Comment from tfawcus
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A splendid poem introducing these fascinating facts, I imagine Eric will spend a great deal of time flicking his tongue in and out trying to beat .07 seconds. Congratulations to Graham on a fine picture accompaniment. F is for Fantastic!

 Comment Written 10-May-2020


reply by the author on 10-May-2020
    I can see Eric trying that too, lol. Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, and the wonderful comments you've made. F is for Fantastic! I love that!! Thank you, my friend. Have a wonderful day. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Valerie Fish
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This is so lovely...
I worked with autistic children for many years as a special needs assistant,so know how challenging it can be for child and parent alike. It's a cute poem ( I will read it to my four year old grandson ). I like that you have also put some 'fun' facts in as well, making it educational but in a way that's geared to a young audience.
Well Done

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 Comment Written 10-May-2020


reply by the author on 10-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Valerie. Your review was what I was hoping to read when you said it was educationally geared to a younger audience. I do try to keep it fun and not too technical so as not to bore them. My grandson is border-line autistic, and dyslexic, and he does struggle. It was his idea that I write him some books, which was so encouraging. That started my 'Eric's Epic Adventures'. I can't stop writing for him now!! lol. Thank you again, and have a lovely day. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Sandramitchell,
Nice piece of General Non-Fiction beautifully depicting 'F - Is For Frog' using verse as well as prose technique, and likewise you are planning to teach all the English Alphabet - A Wonderful Plan!
So far as this 'F' letter is concerned, you have transparently presented it through Frog's different characteristics and activities.
The poem 'Ff is for Frog' is PERFECTLY meaningful and has enchanting flow from top to bottom with lovely rhyming scheme.
Pictures enhance depth and beauty of the theme.
Entertaining and Educative.
LOVELY, and worth following Method for Teaching English Alphabet.
LAUDABLE Attempt!

 Comment Written 10-May-2020


reply by the author on 10-May-2020
    What a lovely review, RP! Thank you so very much for the six stars, and all the wonderful comments you've made about my F for Frog. I thought there were some 'fascinating' facts about them that my grandson would be bound to enjoy. I'm delighted you did. Thank you, and have a lovely day. :)) Sandra xx
reply by RPSaxena on 12-May-2020
    Sandra, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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Hurray for the frogs! I loved the description with some things I didn't know and enjoyed the children's rhyme.
I have at least five frogs in my little pond in the garden. They sit on the big floating leaves of the lilypad or the small rocky statue in the middle of the pond. Every late afternoon they give a croaky concert, as a sign of spring.

 Comment Written 10-May-2020


reply by the author on 10-May-2020
    Aw, thank you so much for the six stars, Marjon. I can just picture your frogs on the lily-pad. We have a pond with fish in, and a header pond that flows into the main pond, the smaller one is for the birds, they love to bathe in it. The blackbird is the best at washing, but so much water splashes out, Graham has to top it up every other day. But it's lovely to watch them. I'd love to hear the croaky concert! lol Thanks again, my friend, and have a lovely day. :)) Sandra xx
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 10-May-2020
    You are very welcome. I like this series of strange animals so much!
Comment from Anya Trofimova
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This is great! I actually learned something new about frogs myself. I also love the image of the frog's tongue coiled like a spring. All the best, a.t.

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reply by the author on 10-May-2020
    Thank you, Anya, for this lovely review, I'm so very pleased you enjoyed reading about the frogs. Have a lovely day! :) Sandra xx