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Winds of change

37 total reviews 
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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A lovely slightly disturbing 4-line poem. In a few lines and words come forward the unrest of a multitude of unexpected and confusing events.
Illustrated very well the whirling unsettling thoughts, described as "My hair was tousled, as was my life.

Good poem.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you very much for your kind review and insightful comments. It is always so appreciated.
    Sending my best today as always, Sally xo
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 12-May-2020
    Welcome, Sally
Comment from country ranch writer
Exceptional
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This a great set up and presentation representing the swirling wind.wind seems to be running heater skelter everywhere.not able to stop it.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and six stars! I'm so delighted you enjoyed my poem and presentation. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
reply by country ranch writer on 14-May-2020
    You have a good day my friend stay safe.
reply by country ranch writer on 14-May-2020
    You have a good day my friend stay safe.
Comment from Irish Rain
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This could certainly describe
these days.
Beautiful, picture and poem.
A great entry for this four-line
contest. Good luck!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you very much for the kind review and compliments. I hope you're well and good. Sending you our best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
reply by Irish Rain on 12-May-2020
    Happy Tuesday!!
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Don't you hate it when life is so hard that it not only messes up your hair but it messes up your whole life. Thanks for sharing this concept in your creative way. Bill

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you very much for the review. Your kindness is always so appreciated and needed. Sending you my best today as always, Sally :))
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this creatively-conceived, dramatically emotional piece. The simile you used to convey the theme is superb.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you very much for your wonderful review the kind compliments. I appreciate you so much. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from papa55mike
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Our lives do get tousled from time to time. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the picture.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

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 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from zanya
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Yes though a relatively short poetic format a lot for the reader to ponder and reflect upon especially right now as our world seems to move to a different rhythm

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 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you very much for the kind review and compliments. So good to see you and read your review today.
    Sending my best today as always, Sally xo