Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "THE LAST CHAPTER of Book 4"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
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Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Hurray! The aqua-beings have their new planet where they can be sure to survive as a race.
Eric has been instrumental in making this possible, and all his friends, especially Drozig and Herbie have helped him to make this adventure possible.
Sandra, congratulations! You have written a delightful book for children. Your grandson will be so proud of you!
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Hurray! The aqua-beings have their new planet where they can be sure to survive as a race.
Eric has been instrumental in making this possible, and all his friends, especially Drozig and Herbie have helped him to make this adventure possible.
Sandra, congratulations! You have written a delightful book for children. Your grandson will be so proud of you!
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Dear Marjon, thank you so very much for the wonderful six stars, and the fabulous review! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this story. I now have to get it ready to publish for Eric to read. (with a little help) I really appreciate all the support you've given me, my friend, thank you! :)) Sandra xxx
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So very welcome. I enjoyed the book a lot.
Comment from country ranch writer
Adventure for a boy is having to keep it all inside and never tell. A feat most boys can't do because they want to blab everything to get a pat on the back for a job well done.
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Adventure for a boy is having to keep it all inside and never tell. A feat most boys can't do because they want to blab everything to get a pat on the back for a job well done.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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You are so right! LOL, in real life, I know Eric would never be able to keep this a secret. Bless him. Thank you so very much for the lovely comments and the wonderful 6 stars. I really appreciate all the support you've given me. Thank you! :)) Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
NO!!!!!! NOT THE LAST CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT WILL I READ??????? I really enjoyed reading this and I know young children will too. I can't imagine they wouldn't. I can't wait for Eric's next adventure.
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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NO!!!!!! NOT THE LAST CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT WILL I READ??????? I really enjoyed reading this and I know young children will too. I can't imagine they wouldn't. I can't wait for Eric's next adventure.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Aww, Barbara, thank you so very much, you've put such a big smile on my face. Thank you so much for the six stars, and this amazing review, lol, you have made my day. I'm sure Eric will be off again, soon. Sending you a big hug, my friend, for all the support you've given me. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
I like the crew have been spellbound by this story. I am a sucker for myth an legend, and the Atlantis story has always grabbed me.
The sentence below kind of sums up for me your technique that is spot on for your target readers. Gobsmacked is definitely the correct Atlamntean term, astounded just wouldn't hit the G Spot.
The crew were all spellbound, even Drozig was gobsmacked.
Roll on the next tale, I am sure the pot of inspiration is not empty yet.
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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I like the crew have been spellbound by this story. I am a sucker for myth an legend, and the Atlantis story has always grabbed me.
The sentence below kind of sums up for me your technique that is spot on for your target readers. Gobsmacked is definitely the correct Atlamntean term, astounded just wouldn't hit the G Spot.
The crew were all spellbound, even Drozig was gobsmacked.
Roll on the next tale, I am sure the pot of inspiration is not empty yet.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Bless your heart, Jim. Thank you so very much for this wonderful review, and for the six stars! I'm over the moon that you enjoyed this story. I'm sure Eric will be off again soon, but I must do some editing for a while. Mind you, the last time I said that, Graham came up with Atlantis and I was off again! So who knows... Thank you for all your support, my friend, you've been great. Sending you a hug. :)) Sandra xx
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You are more than welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
All's well that ends well; your endeavour is appreciable; congrats, project is successful; mystic ends; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Best Wishes. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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All's well that ends well; your endeavour is appreciable; congrats, project is successful; mystic ends; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Best Wishes. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Aw, thank you so very much for this lovely review, my friend, and for the lovely six stars. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this story. Your support have been so appreciated. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Shirley McLain
That four is just to get your attention. I did find one thing I'm not understanding (once he was satisfied, he walked straight() it. What did he walk straight to? I missed something. Remind me later and I will change this to a six. Shirley
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reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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That four is just to get your attention. I did find one thing I'm not understanding (once he was satisfied, he walked straight() it. What did he walk straight to? I missed something. Remind me later and I will change this to a six. Shirley
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Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Thanks for pointing it out, Shirley, it was supposed to have been, straight in. not 'it'. I've changed it to, into the water. There is always something I miss, or get wrong. Thanks again! :)) Sandra xx