Mirror, Mirror
A reflected acrostic entry for the contest35 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Amazing poem.and I'm so sorry that I'm out of six stars, your poem deserves a ten. The rhyming is perfect and the conveyed message makes you step into a parallel world. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Amazing poem.and I'm so sorry that I'm out of six stars, your poem deserves a ten. The rhyming is perfect and the conveyed message makes you step into a parallel world. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Your virtual-6 is humbly accepted, Iza. Thank you for this amazing review!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Excellent work even without the acrostic challenge. Especially impressive given the constraints; this does not sound forced--it flows in lovely rhythm and rhyme. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Excellent work even without the acrostic challenge. Especially impressive given the constraints; this does not sound forced--it flows in lovely rhythm and rhyme. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, LIZ!!
Comment from playinaround
Wow wow... I was just thinking about what I read in your poem today.. a very trippy coincidence. I have to apologize that I have no 6s left. You have expressed beautifully, presented beautifully. amazing love it thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Wow wow... I was just thinking about what I read in your poem today.. a very trippy coincidence. I have to apologize that I have no 6s left. You have expressed beautifully, presented beautifully. amazing love it thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, playinaround!
Comment from beizanten
An attention capturing title, remind me of snow white. A beautifully written first paragraph and the picture really suit it. Another beautifully written paragraph. you are talented, thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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An attention capturing title, remind me of snow white. A beautifully written first paragraph and the picture really suit it. Another beautifully written paragraph. you are talented, thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Wow, beizanten, you have certainly just made my day with your wonderful review and those bright shiny stars!! :) ;) Thank you so very much for both and for stopping by for the review - be sure to stop by again sometime when the contest is done!! ;) Take care and enjoy the remainder of the week! ;)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This acrostic poem is excellent in every respect. It conveys a lovely and touching message about the power of memory, how many things change, and some don't. It is very skillfully written with vivid detail, rhyme, and meter.
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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This acrostic poem is excellent in every respect. It conveys a lovely and touching message about the power of memory, how many things change, and some don't. It is very skillfully written with vivid detail, rhyme, and meter.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, Janice - they mean a lot to me!
