The virus
Reissue from last year40 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Wow! Just loved it! I like that you personify the virus. I have done this also in some writings I have done lately. Thank you for sharing! I am definitely going to look into your novel that you mentioned.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Wow! Just loved it! I like that you personify the virus. I have done this also in some writings I have done lately. Thank you for sharing! I am definitely going to look into your novel that you mentioned.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you much...John
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Fantastic, this is a very thorough, research-oriented and analytical writing about virus, CORONAVIRUS or COVID 19, this gives us a fair idea about the origin, source, benefits and teachings without lessons but through its effect, we have understood the value of the virus in action; it has changed our view and attitude toward living a life; I have enjoyed the read. You may and you are free to buy a gift card $ 10 MD and may gift me to help me make a Premier Shield upgraded membership.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Fantastic, this is a very thorough, research-oriented and analytical writing about virus, CORONAVIRUS or COVID 19, this gives us a fair idea about the origin, source, benefits and teachings without lessons but through its effect, we have understood the value of the virus in action; it has changed our view and attitude toward living a life; I have enjoyed the read. You may and you are free to buy a gift card $ 10 MD and may gift me to help me make a Premier Shield upgraded membership.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Many thanks...John
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That made so much sense! I really feel angry at those up the top taking all the time whilst pretending to be doing things to benefit us lower morsels. I do sincerely hope people will come away from this virus with a different outlook on life and neighbours. We really do need to. Well done, that was a really excellent post. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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That made so much sense! I really feel angry at those up the top taking all the time whilst pretending to be doing things to benefit us lower morsels. I do sincerely hope people will come away from this virus with a different outlook on life and neighbours. We really do need to. Well done, that was a really excellent post. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thanks....John
Comment from rama devi
Perfect commentary--penetrating, compassionate, sarcastically witty too. Well paced, articulate (as usual from you) and portraying immense wisdom laced with humor.
A few spags:
*The lessons you taught us have been firmly imbedded (embedded) in the entire world population(,) and you have no need to breed your progeny to give us more pain.
*GREAT LINE (note one spag):
If I should be the last person on e(E)arth, I would not seek the company of cash.
*You have made us realize that "all men were created equal" is true, (NO COMMA BEFORE PARENTHESIS) (except in omitting women from the
*dis-ease
disease
(unless the hyphen was intentional to accentuate it is not having ease)
Another great line: We thank you for bringing us closer by separating us.
This is brilliant. Thanks for sharing!
Warmly,
rd
P.S. Will you be sending your book back to me soon for editing?
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Perfect commentary--penetrating, compassionate, sarcastically witty too. Well paced, articulate (as usual from you) and portraying immense wisdom laced with humor.
A few spags:
*The lessons you taught us have been firmly imbedded (embedded) in the entire world population(,) and you have no need to breed your progeny to give us more pain.
*GREAT LINE (note one spag):
If I should be the last person on e(E)arth, I would not seek the company of cash.
*You have made us realize that "all men were created equal" is true, (NO COMMA BEFORE PARENTHESIS) (except in omitting women from the
*dis-ease
disease
(unless the hyphen was intentional to accentuate it is not having ease)
Another great line: We thank you for bringing us closer by separating us.
This is brilliant. Thanks for sharing!
Warmly,
rd
P.S. Will you be sending your book back to me soon for editing?
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Changes are made. Your praise brings me hope. Thanks.. John
I sent you an Email...
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Thanks...got your email. So glad you feel renewed hope! :) I love your writing.
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Everything happens for a reason...
There are no accidents.
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Absolutely agree!
Comment from Scarbrems
I agree with much of what you say, here and sincerely hope you are right and we have learned and will carry this forward. Hate to be pessimistic, but I doubt it...
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I agree with much of what you say, here and sincerely hope you are right and we have learned and will carry this forward. Hate to be pessimistic, but I doubt it...
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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The spirit we access to experience living as a human never goes away. It has always been and forever will be available Here and Now. There is no death, only transformation. Think of others in much worse circumstances. Let your love flow to them...John
Comment from LisaMay
You have itemised the lessons learned by observation and intelligent response in an articulate manner that is spot on. Plutocrats, elitists, sports nuts, the tax department and certain politicians will not agree, but for me your article is gratifyingly accurate to have pinpointed the conclusions i have come to myself.
I like this point best:
8. Social Security happens when we take care of each other. You have made us realize what Social Insecurity is.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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You have itemised the lessons learned by observation and intelligent response in an articulate manner that is spot on. Plutocrats, elitists, sports nuts, the tax department and certain politicians will not agree, but for me your article is gratifyingly accurate to have pinpointed the conclusions i have come to myself.
I like this point best:
8. Social Security happens when we take care of each other. You have made us realize what Social Insecurity is.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thanks. You have permission to disseminate this article as much as you wish. Love is the answer....John
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Thank you. It is certainly worthy of wide readership. Love has always been the answer but self interest blinds people.
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Please do not allow your own self-interest prevent you from participation in this tsunami of change. Communicate. Love, John...
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My only self interest is that everyone should see this as an opportunity for improvement as a community of brotherhood.
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Stay tuned....More to come.
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS******beautiful so profound how you paint our changing world how peoples lives so disrupted all over world dangerous virus. Read Review mine also. liberty
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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SIX STARS******beautiful so profound how you paint our changing world how peoples lives so disrupted all over world dangerous virus. Read Review mine also. liberty
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Glad you liked it..,John
Comment from zanya
Here it is - the virus- unmasked and its impact on our earthly world and our manmade systems that serve to hinder rather than help many of earth's citizenry
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Here it is - the virus- unmasked and its impact on our earthly world and our manmade systems that serve to hinder rather than help many of earth's citizenry
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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You got it....John
Comment from Shirley McLain
Your commentary was great and I enjoyed reading it. I did not find a single mistake within the story but in the comment section you left out the word ago (I think). Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Your commentary was great and I enjoyed reading it. I did not find a single mistake within the story but in the comment section you left out the word ago (I think). Shirley
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you much....John
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Amazing the things we can 'learn' from terrible situations.... although, as you allude to here, the human capacity for such learning is severely limited or retarded for some reason.... :) An interesting offering -- thanx for sharing! ;)
population and you --> population, and you
off dis-ease --> off disease
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Amazing the things we can 'learn' from terrible situations.... although, as you allude to here, the human capacity for such learning is severely limited or retarded for some reason.... :) An interesting offering -- thanx for sharing! ;)
population and you --> population, and you
off dis-ease --> off disease
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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dis-ease is intentional. Thanks...John
