Discovery
A view into the unseen.36 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being aware of ones surroundings and appreciating what we see, hear and feel in this world brings great contentment and your poem is poignant and meaningful, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Being aware of ones surroundings and appreciating what we see, hear and feel in this world brings great contentment and your poem is poignant and meaningful, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Dolly, your words show much love and compassion. Blessings to you.
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Yours is the first poem I have read for this Hope contest that does not mention the word "hope" in it yet - still reveals hope can be found in unexpected places. I wish you well with your entry,
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Yours is the first poem I have read for this Hope contest that does not mention the word "hope" in it yet - still reveals hope can be found in unexpected places. I wish you well with your entry,
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I agree with you, dear poet. Thank you for reading and considering my work.
Comment from Aaron Rodenburg
I like the hope you inspired by showing the need throughout your poem. It was like newton and the Apple... you nailed your photo as well...thank you for your poetry!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I like the hope you inspired by showing the need throughout your poem. It was like newton and the Apple... you nailed your photo as well...thank you for your poetry!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Aaron, how incisive your comments. Lovely!
Comment from Minglement
Wow, this is a deep and somewhat mysterious entry for the Hope Poem contest. Well crafted phrases that paint ethereal pictures and ending on a igh note of hope. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Wow, this is a deep and somewhat mysterious entry for the Hope Poem contest. Well crafted phrases that paint ethereal pictures and ending on a igh note of hope. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I truly appreciate your time to read and comment in my poem about hope. Thank you for letting me know.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely artwork--I'll try to find it from fanart myself! Clever: a view into the unseen. Fresh imagery: to reach the street of multiple lights...you were sovereign...new world on underside; freeway of imperceptible indentations. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Lovely artwork--I'll try to find it from fanart myself! Clever: a view into the unseen. Fresh imagery: to reach the street of multiple lights...you were sovereign...new world on underside; freeway of imperceptible indentations. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Yhank you Liz, your comments are like a blam of sweetness. nes
Comment from Gloria ....
This is superb, author. Your artwork choice and inspired one to draw our eyes into the body of your poem which illustrates with excellent imagery and emotion the journey through times of spiritual loss to a new awakening at seeing the underside of a leaf. They truly are magnificent.
A superb entry into the contest and I wish you much luck in the booth.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is superb, author. Your artwork choice and inspired one to draw our eyes into the body of your poem which illustrates with excellent imagery and emotion the journey through times of spiritual loss to a new awakening at seeing the underside of a leaf. They truly are magnificent.
A superb entry into the contest and I wish you much luck in the booth.
Gloria
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Gloria. Thank you.
