We Walk This Road as One
A Love Story Sonnet51 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The feelings seemed personally and realistic, as well as being sweet and heartwarming. I am glad to hear that your friends are doing well!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. The feelings seemed personally and realistic, as well as being sweet and heartwarming. I am glad to hear that your friends are doing well!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and for your kind comments and best wishes.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Janet. This is a lovely poem for your friends. Their longevity in their marriage is commendable and I'm happy to hear that Jim is doing well. We never know how long, day-to-day, we will have loved ones with us. Marilyn
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Hi Janet. This is a lovely poem for your friends. Their longevity in their marriage is commendable and I'm happy to hear that Jim is doing well. We never know how long, day-to-day, we will have loved ones with us. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Marilyn for this wonderful review and for your kind comments and best wishes.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from joycetreasures
Jmf4119,
This is a beautiful sultry love poem. No problem with your 10 syllable lines. Good job. Your sonnet poem is how a relationship should be from beginning to end? This is a nice rhyming poem. The flow and structure are very good. I like the photo you use. It is very warm with a beautiful sunset.
I did enjoy reading it. The characters seem so real.
This is a nice sentence; "New challenges confront our worldly race
whose finish line we'll cross with dignity.) Great title!!
Nice job! Thanks
Keep writing:-)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Jmf4119,
This is a beautiful sultry love poem. No problem with your 10 syllable lines. Good job. Your sonnet poem is how a relationship should be from beginning to end? This is a nice rhyming poem. The flow and structure are very good. I like the photo you use. It is very warm with a beautiful sunset.
I did enjoy reading it. The characters seem so real.
This is a nice sentence; "New challenges confront our worldly race
whose finish line we'll cross with dignity.) Great title!!
Nice job! Thanks
Keep writing:-)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Joyce for this wonderful review and the extra special sixth star. I appreciate your kind comments and hearing from you.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome. Glad to hear the good news about Jim. Blessings to you both:-)
Comment from Frank Jauregui
I felt your love sonnet expressed beautiful sentiments of long enduring, love quite wonderfully. The multi-colored sky in the image you chose reflect the good and bad, in every relationship. In the end, it all comes together beautifully as two, walk as one - through gardens filled with every shade and hue. God bless you and your entry. God Bless you and your entry.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I felt your love sonnet expressed beautiful sentiments of long enduring, love quite wonderfully. The multi-colored sky in the image you chose reflect the good and bad, in every relationship. In the end, it all comes together beautifully as two, walk as one - through gardens filled with every shade and hue. God bless you and your entry. God Bless you and your entry.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Frank for this wonderful review and for your kind comments and best wishes.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
What a generous heart you have dear Janet. You have a gift and you share an give it to others, that is not only commendable but an excellent witness to others. Praise God for you, you help others by encouraging them to do the same. They are precious to God, your friends, a beautifully written sonnet Janet, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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What a generous heart you have dear Janet. You have a gift and you share an give it to others, that is not only commendable but an excellent witness to others. Praise God for you, you help others by encouraging them to do the same. They are precious to God, your friends, a beautifully written sonnet Janet, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you Roy for this wonderful review and kind comments. You always lift my spirits and in days like these, that is so welcome my friend.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
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My pleasure
Comment from Raul1
Well written. I have enjoyed reading this poem. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Well written. I have enjoyed reading this poem. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and for your kind comments.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Love Story Sonnet
We Walk This Road as One
by Jmf4119
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful sonnet in fine form rhyme scheme and meter. A great entry for the love poem contest. Well done.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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A Love Story Sonnet
We Walk This Road as One
by Jmf4119
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful sonnet in fine form rhyme scheme and meter. A great entry for the love poem contest. Well done.
Gypsy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Gypsy for this wonderful review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great tribute to Jim and Ingrid, Janet. Your words flow from your heart with great sincerity and imagery. I like the way this progresses through the years with love that grows strong each year. You art choice is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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This is a great tribute to Jim and Ingrid, Janet. Your words flow from your heart with great sincerity and imagery. I like the way this progresses through the years with love that grows strong each year. You art choice is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Jan for this wonderful review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written Shakespearean sonnet. It tells of love lasting through all life's obstacles. The romantic artwork is a perfect fit to the words.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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This is a well written Shakespearean sonnet. It tells of love lasting through all life's obstacles. The romantic artwork is a perfect fit to the words.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Joan for this wonderful review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
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Hey Janet, Your are very kindly welcome.
Hope everyone is healthy where you are. God bless you.
Joan
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You are confident of completing the race of living and winning, you walk together, you are lovers to face all challenges and oddities, you are hopeful and committed to righteous activation, in God you trust, faith and dedication will bring in colour; God helps you gift me a little help make my premier shield upgrade; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; I liked the inspirational message.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You are confident of completing the race of living and winning, you walk together, you are lovers to face all challenges and oddities, you are hopeful and committed to righteous activation, in God you trust, faith and dedication will bring in colour; God helps you gift me a little help make my premier shield upgrade; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; I liked the inspirational message.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and kind comments. Your review is uplifting and I truly appreciated.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet