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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about leaning over from the wheelchair to touch a rose us quite an effort for someone in a wheelchair to do without either falling forward or let the chair slips out underneath you.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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A very well-written poem about leaning over from the wheelchair to touch a rose us quite an effort for someone in a wheelchair to do without either falling forward or let the chair slips out underneath you.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Fortunately, I haven't been confined to a wheelchair myself, but I have pushed many people confined to one and they undergo a lot of difficulties. Your comments are right on target and I appreciate them very much, Sandra!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Janet.
-You have a good poem
with the seasonal land
nature imagery.
-You paint a vivid
word picture of the
person in the wheelchair
who appreciates this lovely rose.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Janet.
-You have a good poem
with the seasonal land
nature imagery.
-You paint a vivid
word picture of the
person in the wheelchair
who appreciates this lovely rose.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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I appreciate your supportive review very much, Pam. Thank you greatly for these kind comments! ♥♥
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You are very welcome, Janet.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Wonderful poem!
It's innate to love beauty. The old, feeble, disabled, sick, even children are pleased with beautiful things or smells. The majority of people appreciate beauty whether or not they think about it.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Wonderful poem!
It's innate to love beauty. The old, feeble, disabled, sick, even children are pleased with beautiful things or smells. The majority of people appreciate beauty whether or not they think about it.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Your comments are so true...I have worked with people having a lot of difficulties and seeing and appreciating something beautiful is always an uplift. Thank you so much for this lovely review!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Aussie
Beautiful. I see the world from my wheelchair, I see many beautiful things that you do not. I smell the flowers, pat a small dog, see a crack in the concrete that maybe I will get caught in. Leaning Over caught my eye, because wheelie's see a different world to you. Love, K.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Beautiful. I see the world from my wheelchair, I see many beautiful things that you do not. I smell the flowers, pat a small dog, see a crack in the concrete that maybe I will get caught in. Leaning Over caught my eye, because wheelie's see a different world to you. Love, K.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thoughts of you really did come to mind as I was writing this, my friend. (With all those fires happening nearby, you were still able to share some wonderful postings. That's a spirit of loveliness equal to anything found in the natural world.) xo
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Thank you my dear friend. Many lessons are learned when power is taken away and instead, wisdom takes it's place. Love, Kay.
Comment from RShipp
Such a great mental picture you have created with so few words.
I can see (in my mind) a little old lady who doesn't get out often enjoying the rose garden.
Best of luck in the Haiku Poetry Contest contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Such a great mental picture you have created with so few words.
I can see (in my mind) a little old lady who doesn't get out often enjoying the rose garden.
Best of luck in the Haiku Poetry Contest contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for this super review that I cherish. I'm so glad to know you enjoyed the posting. :-)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
(leaning over) minimal format, is short,succinct and very much to the to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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(leaning over) minimal format, is short,succinct and very much to the to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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I have updated the posting so it has a different name now. The haiku takes a change in direction but the emotional content is the same. Thank you for a wonderful review! :-)
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Spangle,
you're more than welcome.
God bless and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from Sanku
I did not know that the contest allowed minimum syllable count .Anyway In thirteen syllables you were able to present a very poignant picture .Disability is not a problem for enjoying nature.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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I did not know that the contest allowed minimum syllable count .Anyway In thirteen syllables you were able to present a very poignant picture .Disability is not a problem for enjoying nature.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Your comment about enjoying nature is so true. Even when we're down, seeing something beautiful can be an uplift when it is needed the most. Thank you so much for this super review!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Janet. The picture you made for this is really interesting. The message from the haiku is graphic and mentally visible for the reader. Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Hello Janet. The picture you made for this is really interesting. The message from the haiku is graphic and mentally visible for the reader. Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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This is a lovely review, Robert. Thank you so much! --Janet
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You're welcome Janet.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
So glad to see that you are writing again. I love your quote about the lady who touches a rose from her wheelchair. I must ask if you alright after the tornado in TN last night.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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So glad to see that you are writing again. I love your quote about the lady who touches a rose from her wheelchair. I must ask if you alright after the tornado in TN last night.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review, Rosy...and
I truly appreciate your concern about the TN tornado. I live in Memphis, however, so we are all okay in this area . It is a horrible tragedy. Hugs, Janet
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Oh my goodness, Jan. The news is showing lots of disaster from the tornado. So glad that your okay.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
No restriction in disability here to touch and feel nature, the appreciation of such beauty exists for everyone, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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No restriction in disability here to touch and feel nature, the appreciation of such beauty exists for everyone, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you greatly, Dolly. I always appreciate your comments very much!!