Gossamer Dreams
Palindrome poem41 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Well it has been awhile since I've read a palindrome poem and this is beautiful, WJ.
There is something always unique about mystical worlds with magical creatures and things that glow.
Many thanks for the fine reminder and for sharing a nice fantasy. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
Well it has been awhile since I've read a palindrome poem and this is beautiful, WJ.
There is something always unique about mystical worlds with magical creatures and things that glow.
Many thanks for the fine reminder and for sharing a nice fantasy. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Hi Gloria,
Thanks you for the encouraging review. I am happy to hear you enjoyed the fantasy.
Debi
Comment from June Sargent
This was a beautiful example of a palindrome poem! I have always felt a bit challenged by the format. But you made it seem so easy. Great rhythm. Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
This was a beautiful example of a palindrome poem! I have always felt a bit challenged by the format. But you made it seem so easy. Great rhythm. Well done!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the generous six star rating and the wonderful comments. I am happy you enjoyed it.
Debi
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your detailed palindrome. You did a great job with its style. I wasn't expecting to read the poem in print a second time. I was going to read myself from the bottom to the top--but you made it easy to follow your theme and style. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
I enjoyed your detailed palindrome. You did a great job with its style. I wasn't expecting to read the poem in print a second time. I was going to read myself from the bottom to the top--but you made it easy to follow your theme and style. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Hi Jan,
Thank you for the encouraging comments about this palindrome. That forwards and backwards stuff is a challenge, and it was fun to write.
Debi
Comment from Susan Larson
Awesome, totally awesome. Captivating,most captivating. Perfect picture, gorgeous picture perfect. Did I read repeatedly? Repeatedly read, I did. You inspired me to try....my feeble attempt making me appreciate all the more your mastery of words and images. Seven, deservedly seven. But alas, I can only give a six.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
Awesome, totally awesome. Captivating,most captivating. Perfect picture, gorgeous picture perfect. Did I read repeatedly? Repeatedly read, I did. You inspired me to try....my feeble attempt making me appreciate all the more your mastery of words and images. Seven, deservedly seven. But alas, I can only give a six.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I love your response! Of course, the six star rating is wonderful and much appreciated, as is the virtual seven. Your palindrome response is clever and is one I won't soon forget.
Debi
Comment from gingermo
Clever, clever, clever. Wonderful title and picture... The fantasy of a Gossamer Dream personified...faeries dancing, unicorns prancing, magical, mystical, moonbeams all add to the mood of this imaginative poem.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
Clever, clever, clever. Wonderful title and picture... The fantasy of a Gossamer Dream personified...faeries dancing, unicorns prancing, magical, mystical, moonbeams all add to the mood of this imaginative poem.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your response to this poem. I am happy to hear you thought it was clever and imaginative. That is so encouraging.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with this difficult style of poetry. I wish this had been in a contest. It reads smoothly and makes sense forward and backwards and gives a glimpse of the magical world of fairies. This would fit well in your Piper book.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
Great job with this difficult style of poetry. I wish this had been in a contest. It reads smoothly and makes sense forward and backwards and gives a glimpse of the magical world of fairies. This would fit well in your Piper book.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Hi Helen,
Thanks for the great review. It's funny you mention a contest. As I hit release for this work I thought I hadn't seen a palindrome contest on the site in a while. I've had several people remark they've never seen a palindrome poem before. I think I might sponsor one.
Hmm. I hadn't thought of tying this Piper.
Debi
Comment from Frank Jauregui
I am amazed at your Palindrome, I never even thought to write a poem in this form. Now you've got me thinking. I think the image you chose also, in its own way reflects the imagery of your text.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
I am amazed at your Palindrome, I never even thought to write a poem in this form. Now you've got me thinking. I think the image you chose also, in its own way reflects the imagery of your text.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind comments. Yes, please try one and see what you think about the form.
Comment from Karen Iseminger
This absolutely fit the genre! I can't imagine the effort that went into creating this beautiful work. It's lovely and well thought out. Good luck with your writing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
This absolutely fit the genre! I can't imagine the effort that went into creating this beautiful work. It's lovely and well thought out. Good luck with your writing.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind comments. I am happy to hear you enjoyed this poem. It was fun to write.
Debi
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Gossamer Dreams", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. To me, this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
"Gossamer Dreams", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. To me, this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind comments and the virtual six. Both are appreciated.
Debi
Debi,
you deserved a true six.
God bless and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image, Debi.
-This is a very good
palindrome poem with
a good topic, imagery,
and smooth flow of ideas.
-Effective rhyme and imagery
about "mystical, magical worlds"
of the storyteller.
-It reads very well and I enjoyed it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
-Great image, Debi.
-This is a very good
palindrome poem with
a good topic, imagery,
and smooth flow of ideas.
-Effective rhyme and imagery
about "mystical, magical worlds"
of the storyteller.
-It reads very well and I enjoyed it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi Pam,
Thank you for the wonderful comments. I thought I would never do another palindrome poem, but this one would not go away so here it is. I am happy you enjoyed it.
Debi
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You are very welcome, Debi. It worked very well with the topic and images.