Waiting in the Weeds
Sometimes it feels like our dreams have been put on hold!35 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
Sometimes we feel abandoned as the bus in the woods. Our time is done and we move on. But like the bus that sits in the meadow, a few pieces still work. And so with us. We just sit and wait for HIS TIME@
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Sometimes we feel abandoned as the bus in the woods. Our time is done and we move on. But like the bus that sits in the meadow, a few pieces still work. And so with us. We just sit and wait for HIS TIME@
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
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You're welcome!!
Patty
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the metaphor here and our dreams are sometimes on hold. I enjoyed your end rhymes even though the meter wasn't as smooth as it could have been, I enjoyed the sentiments, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed the metaphor here and our dreams are sometimes on hold. I enjoyed your end rhymes even though the meter wasn't as smooth as it could have been, I enjoyed the sentiments, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
Comment from Raul1
This is right. All we need to wait is for God's time. Well written. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This is right. All we need to wait is for God's time. Well written. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
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You're welcome
Comment from patcelaw
Many times in life we feel we have it all together, only to find in practice that the together falls apart. But when we wait for God's timing then things stay in place.
Patricia
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Many times in life we feel we have it all together, only to find in practice that the together falls apart. But when we wait for God's timing then things stay in place.
Patricia
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, but that waiting can be so tough! :) A fun and wise offering for the contest - good luck! ;) I would suggest that you either lighten your text or change your background from black as the contrast between the two is so faint that it makes it difficult to read... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Oh, but that waiting can be so tough! :) A fun and wise offering for the contest - good luck! ;) I would suggest that you either lighten your text or change your background from black as the contrast between the two is so faint that it makes it difficult to read... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I just want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you so very much for those five beautiful stars. ?Waiting in the weeds? is my autobiographical challenge at this time in my life. Some would call me old, I just want to think I?m experienced LOL I also want to think that I am prepped for a whole new field of endeavor that is really my destiny. I?m glad you felt like you could relate to a voice that tells you, you too have more in you and it?s not too late. God isn?t done working, and you are a part of his plan. God bless you, embrace the love from above.
Thanks for the suggestion, right away I changed the background color and it became much more readable, you definitely helped me to enhance the readability!