Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

Before reading this, I did not know what a white-out was. Now, I know, and I would agree with you, that driving in a blizzard is a risky business. The artwork brings home, the hecticness of not being able to see, when in a blizzard, or 'white-out'. Thank you for introducing me to a term I was not aware of. I don't live in an area where white-outs happen, (thankfully). You get across your message in short order. Well done.
Take care, Jesse

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019

Jesse, I am glad to have been the teacher.

reply by Jesse James Doty on 26-Dec-2019

Thank you so much.
Jesse

Comment from Barbaraj1

Excellent

This is a very good 2-3-2 poem. Your syllable count is correct. I like
the message your sending. Your artwork is very good.
Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019

Barbara, thanks

Comment from royowen

Excellent

An excellent entry in this 2/3/2 poetry contests, oh yes indeed, we only experienced one, in New York in 2010, a good post, these are difficult to win, so good luck. Well done, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019

Thanks my good friend...

reply by royowen on 25-Dec-2019

My pleasure

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 2-3-2 poem about heavyour snow that makes driving on the roads extremely dangerous and it is wise to avoid any driving for a while.

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 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019

Thank you