My Meaning of Life
From Aristotle to Eckart Tolle man is in constant inquiry36 total reviews
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a well written poem which meets the specifications outlined in the contest guidelines. The message is clear and the rhyme scheme works well. The picture is a nice addition. One question - I did not see how it was particularly "Celtic."
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This is a well written poem which meets the specifications outlined in the contest guidelines. The message is clear and the rhyme scheme works well. The picture is a nice addition. One question - I did not see how it was particularly "Celtic."
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Susan, I meant this as a summation from the refection of my notes - I realize the confusion and retitled this thanks for making this point.
Comment from Sallyo
That's both elegant and practical, lyrical and pragmatic, and tells the story of lives well-lived and finishing with a flourish. It's a lot to get into 12 lines. Very well done!
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That's both elegant and practical, lyrical and pragmatic, and tells the story of lives well-lived and finishing with a flourish. It's a lot to get into 12 lines. Very well done!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Ogden
This is a most insightful response to an unanswerable question. I agree that everyone would have a different theory, as no two minds work the same way.
Don
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This is a most insightful response to an unanswerable question. I agree that everyone would have a different theory, as no two minds work the same way.
Don
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
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Don, thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A lovely defining collection of couplets in answer to this most important question... and done in only ten lines! Love that you've woven some Celtic and some family legacy... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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A lovely defining collection of couplets in answer to this most important question... and done in only ten lines! Love that you've woven some Celtic and some family legacy... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you Yvette
Comment from Wabigoon
Nicely done. This topic seems to bring out some pretty good poems, all very different so far and excellent. I congratulate you for being among them to tackle this topic successfully.
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Wabigoon/Jeff
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Nicely done. This topic seems to bring out some pretty good poems, all very different so far and excellent. I congratulate you for being among them to tackle this topic successfully.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
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Jeff, thank you and WOW! Six stars...I am humbled.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Meaning of Life writing prompt.
Your well rhymed verse outlines the meaning of life from all angles very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Meaning of Life writing prompt.
Your well rhymed verse outlines the meaning of life from all angles very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
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thanks Sharon, looking forward to reading yours...