Night's end
Horror in three sentences contest entry35 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
Something a serial killer would say. I love that I felt that I was right there with the man as he chopped that body into pieces. You told an amazing story in such a short amount of sentences. Very well done.
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Something a serial killer would say. I love that I felt that I was right there with the man as he chopped that body into pieces. You told an amazing story in such a short amount of sentences. Very well done.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thank you, I love your pseudonym and the spelling of Twysted.
God bless
Comment from NickieT
This is a fantastic entry. You have satisfied the prompt by generating a horrifically gruesome visual without resorting to run-on sentences or trying to over load the story. Your sentences are strong and clear - and creepy!
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This is a fantastic entry. You have satisfied the prompt by generating a horrifically gruesome visual without resorting to run-on sentences or trying to over load the story. Your sentences are strong and clear - and creepy!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
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And creepy! My favorite line lol. Thank you for this awesome review.
God bless
Comment from Susan X Smith
Wow! This dame doesn't play around. I'm afraid it is a rare case though. I don't think most would-be victims are so well prepared. You accomplished the task set out in the writing prompt. Good luck.
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Wow! This dame doesn't play around. I'm afraid it is a rare case though. I don't think most would-be victims are so well prepared. You accomplished the task set out in the writing prompt. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the awesome review. True, we certainly need to be though.
God bless
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is definitely a horror story. You did a good job using just 3
sentence. A lot was said in those sentences. I could seem the image very
clearly in mind.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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This is definitely a horror story. You did a good job using just 3
sentence. A lot was said in those sentences. I could seem the image very
clearly in mind.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
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Awesome review, thank you. I enjoyed the challenge.
God bless
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow... a very sick person armed with machete... it won't be the last time either... :( Great offering for this unusual contest -- best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Wow... a very sick person armed with machete... it won't be the last time either... :( Great offering for this unusual contest -- best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
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Sick indeed. Thank you for the excellent review, my friend.
God bless.