Deception
A husband's will39 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
LOL This is priceless! I swear while I was reading this, I could actually see it happening. I can just imagine the look on the wife's face when she realizes that she didn't get anything but forgiveness. That won't buy much, now will it? LOL
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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LOL This is priceless! I swear while I was reading this, I could actually see it happening. I can just imagine the look on the wife's face when she realizes that she didn't get anything but forgiveness. That won't buy much, now will it? LOL
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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LOL! Thank you, Patty. I enjoyed the challenge this one presented. I appreciate the excellent review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Susan X Smith
Ha, ha. This was great. You performed the difficult task of writing an interesting, yet complete story in a very few words. I couldn't find anything wrong with it. Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Ha, ha. This was great. You performed the difficult task of writing an interesting, yet complete story in a very few words. I couldn't find anything wrong with it. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Susan, thank you for this beautiful six-star review my friend. I enjoyed the challenge.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you tell a complete and thoroughly engaging story brilliantly. Not only is the ending clever and unexpected, it smacks of a valuable life lesson. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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LOL! This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you tell a complete and thoroughly engaging story brilliantly. Not only is the ending clever and unexpected, it smacks of a valuable life lesson. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Mystic. The six-star review has brightened my day. O enjoyed the challenge.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Hitcher
Why... I guess she knows that now, she is probably wondering and being tormented with How. How did he know, how could he do this to me, how am I going to live, how can i contest the will, ha ha. A Nice use of so few words. Good luck!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Why... I guess she knows that now, she is probably wondering and being tormented with How. How did he know, how could he do this to me, how am I going to live, how can i contest the will, ha ha. A Nice use of so few words. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the awesome review, hitcher. I had fun with this little challenge. I love the How's you've presented.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile and or course 'Wills' can be a revelation! Here you made me smile as forgiveness to the wife doesn't mean a fat lot! A clever and fun flash fiction, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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This made me smile and or course 'Wills' can be a revelation! Here you made me smile as forgiveness to the wife doesn't mean a fat lot! A clever and fun flash fiction, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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LOL! Thank you for the awesome review, Dolly. I had fun with this one.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Mistydawn
Hmm, it seems the unfaithful widow got screwed again. The piece of flash fiction is well-written, interesting. You told quite a story in a matter of 80 words. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Hmm, it seems the unfaithful widow got screwed again. The piece of flash fiction is well-written, interesting. You told quite a story in a matter of 80 words. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Lol! Screwed again. Thank you for this most excellent review, my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment from pome lover
ah, the last laugh, the gotcha. and to top it off, the guilt trip. A masterful pay back.
A very good, and well written 80 words flash fiction with the perfect ending.
good job.
pome lover
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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ah, the last laugh, the gotcha. and to top it off, the guilt trip. A masterful pay back.
A very good, and well written 80 words flash fiction with the perfect ending.
good job.
pome lover
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this awesome review, my friend. I enjoyed the challenge this one presented.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Chiferra Burgin
This story had a surprise ending I was not expecting. It is very creative. With the title, I was suspecting the husband was the adulterer. I like the fact that she was not left any money only forgiveness, which should have been a greater gift for her conscience.
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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This story had a surprise ending I was not expecting. It is very creative. With the title, I was suspecting the husband was the adulterer. I like the fact that she was not left any money only forgiveness, which should have been a greater gift for her conscience.
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Right! Thank you for taking the time to review my piece. With the four stars, do you have any critique to offer that may help me grow as an author?
God bless
Steve
Comment from Janilou
I enjoyed this. It appears Evelyn received perhaps a little more than she deserved. LOL Clever flash fiction. I wish you all the very best in the contest. This was good.
Jan
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed this. It appears Evelyn received perhaps a little more than she deserved. LOL Clever flash fiction. I wish you all the very best in the contest. This was good.
Jan
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Heh! Thank you for this excellent review, my friend. I suppose she did.
God bless
Steve