nature's course taken
Haiku poem contest entry35 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
What I find so terribly interesting about nature, is it has no conscience at all. For all existence, nature has changed the contours of the earth and humans play no part nor have any control over it. All we can do is hold on tight and hope we survive. This is a good entry. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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What I find so terribly interesting about nature, is it has no conscience at all. For all existence, nature has changed the contours of the earth and humans play no part nor have any control over it. All we can do is hold on tight and hope we survive. This is a good entry. Best wishes.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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True statement Victor. Thank you for the awesome review, my friend.
God bless
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You are most welcome, mystery writer.
Comment from Ben Colder
The Virgin Islands may get this one coming in and then perhaps Florida. Much like Francis I suppose. Good contest piece. I find nothing wrong. Best to you.
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The Virgin Islands may get this one coming in and then perhaps Florida. Much like Francis I suppose. Good contest piece. I find nothing wrong. Best to you.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Ben. I feel for those in the path. We are still reeling from Hurricane Harvey here in Houston. Hope many years pass before we see another one.
God bless
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Yes. I join in prayer with you
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Thank you
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
this is what's happening in Puerto Rico right now. Is this an image only or is it a real picture? The stormy weather reveals heavy clouds probably contain much wind. Such an amazing picture/poem.
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this is what's happening in Puerto Rico right now. Is this an image only or is it a real picture? The stormy weather reveals heavy clouds probably contain much wind. Such an amazing picture/poem.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the awesome review. We dealt with Hurricane Harvey a couple of years ago. Not a pleasant experience. Lost my home to that one. Ike was many years back, not as bad on us.
God bless
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That menacing cloud looks really dark and threatening, and your words are clever and descriptive, I wish you luck with the contest, an atmospheric write, love Dolly x
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That menacing cloud looks really dark and threatening, and your words are clever and descriptive, I wish you luck with the contest, an atmospheric write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you for this awesome review Dolly.
God bless
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An effective image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-You have written a good haiku
that describes the approaching storm.
-Good use of the '-c' sound to
emphasize the storm.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-You might want to change
natures to nature's.
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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-An effective image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-You have written a good haiku
that describes the approaching storm.
-Good use of the '-c' sound to
emphasize the storm.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-You might want to change
natures to nature's.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you Pam, I thought I might need to change that as well, but then it slipped my mind.
god bless.
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You are very welcome. I was glad to help.