Blended Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Green Machine"A collection of stories: Some True, some not
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Comment from LisaMay
This is wonderful - you really capture that heady feeling of falling in love. You set the scene nicely in the story, with a casual visit to a tire dealership leading to the love match, still remembered vividly today. What a gorgeous green, definitely eye candy. That full race Hemi engine probably got you in trouble with the cops a few times!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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This is wonderful - you really capture that heady feeling of falling in love. You set the scene nicely in the story, with a casual visit to a tire dealership leading to the love match, still remembered vividly today. What a gorgeous green, definitely eye candy. That full race Hemi engine probably got you in trouble with the cops a few times!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Oh, yes the police and I had a few run ins my saving grace was they mostly were in awe of the machine....thankfully!
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A good piece of hot machinery does that to people. I fell in love with motorcycling when I first sat on an amazing looking machine.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Sounds like you found the car of your dreams. What young man wouldn't love it? In your last line 50 should be fifty. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Sounds like you found the car of your dreams. What young man wouldn't love it? In your last line 50 should be fifty. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thank you fixed it!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I understand that cars back then were made better and meant more to owners. I can feel the longing for 'her' in your well-chosen story. Your words flow smoothly, Mystery Author, and the story told is great--a man and his machine. The picture is super. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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I understand that cars back then were made better and meant more to owners. I can feel the longing for 'her' in your well-chosen story. Your words flow smoothly, Mystery Author, and the story told is great--a man and his machine. The picture is super. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thanks
Comment from royowen
I remember them oh, so well. Of course years ago they were reasonably common, and were always associated with "burning rubber". But "big" boys today, aren't much different too the little boys of yesteryear. (My two year old grandson is like that) beautifully written entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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I remember them oh, so well. Of course years ago they were reasonably common, and were always associated with "burning rubber". But "big" boys today, aren't much different too the little boys of yesteryear. (My two year old grandson is like that) beautifully written entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Boys toys! Ahhh, regardless our ages :)
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Well done
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Wow, that would be a hard car to turn down. I remember my brother coming home with a Dodge Charger bought while he was in the Navy. He had to sell it a few months later because he couldn't afford the payments. Very sad. This is a fun tale of a man and his car. Men sure love their cars. You should have seen my first car. So very sad, so very sad. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Wow, that would be a hard car to turn down. I remember my brother coming home with a Dodge Charger bought while he was in the Navy. He had to sell it a few months later because he couldn't afford the payments. Very sad. This is a fun tale of a man and his car. Men sure love their cars. You should have seen my first car. So very sad, so very sad. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Oh but Rox, it was your YOUR. Car..:)
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It was free. =}