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Comment from dmt1967
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This is written well, hence the five but I found it a bit boring. I love your world blowing cosmos poems but am not sure about this style. Just an opinion. Thank you sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from misscookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your write as always you captured my attention from the start it reminded me when my grand daughter and her daughter were at the questionable age
I always asked Him to give the correct answer for unlike God, I did not know sometimes the correct things to say... praise His name Hen helped me every time
thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from the13thpoet
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Good Tuesday Morning to the Dr. of spiritual poetry. Enjoyed this work of yours as I do of all your work I review. I like poems that make you think, I know in this day and age most people like to have someone or something else do their thinking. I think that most people would act like a two year old around GOD. I think they would drive GOD crazy just like a two year old with all their "WHY" questions. Anyway thanks for another great offering.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
In the light of Author's Notes, It's a nicely presented piece of Spiritual Fiction beautifully hinting at UNCONDTIONAL DEVOTION to GOD, and thereby making us FOCUS on our own ABILITIES AND ACTS to lead a successful life on this planet.
SUPERB!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Angela Hayes
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Good read, interesting subject, like summertime look very modern thoughtful image, i like everything about the presentation and style,
it attracts the readers attention and makes them eager to read on,
religious and poetic, spiritual, fiction and very modern day.

Well done and Good Luck!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Patty Palmer
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I cannot say anything whether it's fiction nor non-fiction due to the fact of each person has their own feelings about God and Jesus. And each person reading this, before reading, had their own beliefs and ideas. Whether they change their mind to think as you do, is totally up to them.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I think this is well put. God knows all, we know some. I like that you say there is no religion, God is not a religion, it is man-made. There is one God who is there for all, not just the few. We will get all our answers when we are with Him. Well done, ALD :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Ricky1024
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read and flowed well with no grammar issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
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While Description and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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A well-written spiritual story that we need to always keep in mind. "Why God takes such (Why does God take???) Thanks for sharing this, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Brenda Henderson
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This is interesting and again thought provoking. I must confess though that this impersonal experience has not been akin to my relationship and or experience with GOD as HE has revealed HIMSELF to me. I will not say that my experience is the only experience because I know HE's too big for that and far too vast and unsearchable for me to wrap my mind around the totality of who HE is. However I know that HE has done some things just for me because HE loves me and chose to! Further I know HE will and does for others too! You don't have to take my word for it. Just ask HIM and don't be surprised when HE answers. Well written though.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019