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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Good work with the challenging acrostic form. I read in your footnotes that the repetition is intentional; I figured so--hadn't known that it is a requirement as well! Cheers. LIZ
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Good work with the challenging acrostic form. I read in your footnotes that the repetition is intentional; I figured so--hadn't known that it is a requirement as well! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your acrostic is in good form. I like the way you formatted your lines. I like the use of the two colored fonts, too. Your words are very personal, yet applicable to others who believe. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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Your acrostic is in good form. I like the way you formatted your lines. I like the use of the two colored fonts, too. Your words are very personal, yet applicable to others who believe. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Janetsue
This is an acrostic expressing deep feelings and appreciation for blessings received--especially after experience medical problems. It closes with a glorification of God Almighty for many of His wondrous and unchangeable characteristics.
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This is an acrostic expressing deep feelings and appreciation for blessings received--especially after experience medical problems. It closes with a glorification of God Almighty for many of His wondrous and unchangeable characteristics.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from robyn corum
Al,
I understand I am reading this late, but I'm really glad you are better and the doctors were able to tend to your needs so well. That's awesome! Thank you!
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Al,
I understand I am reading this late, but I'm really glad you are better and the doctors were able to tend to your needs so well. That's awesome! Thank you!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Your poem is a lovely tribute to Him who provides life to all and forgives willingly.
He has the ability to save not only from sin but from afflictions of every kind. He gives inspiration to the learned and to the unlearned alike.
Thanks for sharing.
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Your poem is a lovely tribute to Him who provides life to all and forgives willingly.
He has the ability to save not only from sin but from afflictions of every kind. He gives inspiration to the learned and to the unlearned alike.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Alcreator: I'm glad you are well and can celebrate with Christ.
Cheers for the medical staff and Jesus who walked with you in
your sick times. You ate life saving medicines. What happened?
Thanks for sharing your adventures in the frontline. flylikeaneagle
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Alcreator: I'm glad you are well and can celebrate with Christ.
Cheers for the medical staff and Jesus who walked with you in
your sick times. You ate life saving medicines. What happened?
Thanks for sharing your adventures in the frontline. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Puzzle
Yes God is religion free. You can believe in the god you wish. I thought you did an amazing job with this poem acrostic can be tough to do since you have to commit to those specific letters. Great job!
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Yes God is religion free. You can believe in the god you wish. I thought you did an amazing job with this poem acrostic can be tough to do since you have to commit to those specific letters. Great job!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
As I've seen so far in all your writing, you present a novel and thought producing piece of poetry. I think I would call you a "free range thinker" going off on your own, marching to the beat of your own drum. Very nice.
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As I've seen so far in all your writing, you present a novel and thought producing piece of poetry. I think I would call you a "free range thinker" going off on your own, marching to the beat of your own drum. Very nice.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from June Sargent
With God all things are possible. We just need to have faith. And whatever he decides to do, it is for our benefit. We must never question his ways and always be grateful.
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With God all things are possible. We just need to have faith. And whatever he decides to do, it is for our benefit. We must never question his ways and always be grateful.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Monica Chaddick
First, congrats on being cured! Secondly, the duration from being sick to being cured is well depicted in your words. Best of luck to you during and after these troubling times.
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First, congrats on being cured! Secondly, the duration from being sick to being cured is well depicted in your words. Best of luck to you during and after these troubling times.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020