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The Second Amendment

Protecting The second Amendment

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem and the right for every American to fight for their freedom and protect their land from invaders and the Americans that want to take that away are traitors and should be punished for their treasonous acts.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thank you Sandra for your great words all of which are true. I am so glad you enjoyed this poem and thank you for the 5 stars, so much appreciated.
    Larry
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There is much controversy about the second amendment and the problem is that once the genie is out of the bottle it is hard to get him back into it. American history thwarts the gun control laws because every man has the right to protect himself with a gun. The problem arises when guns are in the hands of maniacs, you have a thought provoking write here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thank you so much Dolly for your great words and you are so correct in what you say. Thank you also for t he 5 stars much appreciated.
    Larry
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you for this Larry. I am in agreement as the liberals want nothing more than to dissolve our constitution, remove our constitutional rights, and open our borders in order to dissolve our sovereignty. I appreciate your courage to speak up.
Always my best to you and yours,
Sally :+)

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thank you Sally for your great words of encouragement and also for the 5 stars. I have other Spiritual/Patriotic poems up here and working on more to come. Feel free to check them out if you like. Have a great day.
    Larry
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Great poem! emotional poem! I can't figure out why these people want to pass laws for no reason. They probably all live in mansions with security guards all around and don't have to worry that someone breaking into their house to burglarize them of break In to steal their child. If they take away our guns then the only people that will have guns is the bad guys.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thank you Patricia for the great and true words you have given. and thank you for the 5 stars as well. Yes if they outlaw guns only the outlaws will have them. I am very pro-Second Amendment for sure. Take care Patrica and have a great day today.
    Larry
reply by Patty Palmer on 20-Jun-2019
    You're welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your did a great job with your presentation about protecting the 2nd Amendment, Larry. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes and a great message. I believe the second amendment is being attacked by many for the wrong reason. It is part of our history and will never go away. If guns are banned from ownership, the criminals will still find a way to get them. It isn't the guns that kill it is the people with the guns. This issue and the NRA has been turned into something that is so confusing. It is easy to say get rid of the guns, Guns have been, and will continue to be, around since their invention. If we allow some to do away with the 2nd amendment, then which one or ones will be next? Thanks for sharing and caring. Jan

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thank you Jan for your great words and 5 stars as well. You were spot on saying what you did and I appreciate hearing those words for sure. I am passionate about the Second Amendment and I pray it will never be taken away. And you are correct if that goes which Amendment is next. Take care.
    Larry
Comment from Aussie
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Firstly, we don't bear weapons in Australia. Secondly, the amount of killings in America is atrocious. School children shot down etc. You have had guns since the days of the Wild West. If you want to carry guns, everyone should have to go through a strict course on how to use them, no concealed weapons like pistols and the latest killings, automatic rifle spitting out bullets should be banned. Why do you need guns at all, for sport yes.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thank you for your reply and the 5 stars. I fully understand your words It is a shame that we do have some killings here in America and it may not get any better, but there are reports of good law abiding citizens carrying guns that have saved innocent lives as well. There are many that go through classes to get their conceal carry permit. I am a U.S. Veteran and my main job in the military was working with guns. The Second Amendment is one of those rights that our forefathers long ago gave us, they had very good insight back then and knew we may have to need them someday for enemies foreign and domestic, it could come to that, you never know. And as the saying goes in the U.S. If they ever outlaw guns it will be the outlaws that will have them, none of the good law abiding citizens will. We need them not only for sport, and for hunting but also to defend our homes and families. Thank you so much again for the nice 5 stars. Take care.
reply by Aussie on 20-Jun-2019
    Larry, Such a shame you feel the need to carry them. This is a controversial subject.
    It's the crims and underworld that give guns a bad critique. Have a good day. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from Ronni
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Hi Larry,
So right you are in your excellent and compelling reflection and
commitment we all should feel, trust, believe in and protect re
Second Amendment rights! You've illustrously captured its essence
and vital purpose in our lives, no matter who we are. Great write!
Great to have you back, and in top form and style again!
Best always, Ronni

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    Thank you once again for the very kind words and the 6 star review. I saw in my messages from Fanstory I was nominated for this poem to be shown on the front page :-) was that you... if so thank you so much. Working on more to come along these lines, but I do not want to forgo my Romantic poetry or my all Spiritual poetry either. Be good and I will reply to you in messages as well.
    Larry
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, The Second Amendment, presented in AABBCC... rhyme scheme, defends our right to bear arms and to be the protectors of what our nation stands for in the face of a growing pacifistic and socialistic culture.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    Thanks Bill and thank you for the 5 stars it is much appreciated. Take care and have a great day.
    Larry
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Thanks for sharing this important writing about the right to bear arms, which is a God-given right to protect ourselves and is meant to be used for good. God open the eyes of the blind people who gets so distorted about this view.
Bill

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    Thank you Bill for this review and the 5 stars it is much appreciated. Take care and have a great day.
    Larry
Comment from the13thpoet
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Larry once again you've done a great job. I like the fact that you took on the 2nd amendment, one of the biggest political tug of wars today. The foresight of the "founding fathers" was amazing.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    Yes there is a big tug of war on this particular amendment. Thank you for the great review and the 5 stars very much appreciated. Have a great day.
    Larry